Audio snippet bong hits

[Scripter]

Something I'm working on

https://soundcloud.com/evild81/bong-hits

[Kin]

Wish this was the full.track bro....but.check.it...

As far as the rhyming on beat u got that down...juz need to focus on finding ur "recording voice"... this soundin pretty monotone to be real...dont focus so much on how you pronounce the words but more on how.you deliver each line...bring energy up when its needed an throw ya voice around a bit...it will be straight...

Props for postin thiz

HoLLa

[Scripter]

thanks for the feed and the positive crits I appreciate it!