you mean you cast your votes based on who had better filler?


some of the votes I've seen on this site are atrocious. There ARE a few people that do great breakdowns with good, constructive criticism - and I hope those people continue to

but I've seen shit like:


bar 1 & bar 3

vs

bar 2, bar 5 & bar 6



vote - the second guy



multiple times now, and that is NOT a legitimate way to vote. I don't see how ANYONE can learn how to improve off that alone. And honestly, there's no point to this text shit other than to have fun and elevate. The W's and L's really don't mean a damn thing




You've seen how long that verse was. Most of our voters did bar by bar breakdowns on every battle

I liked

Supremace
XV Doom
Chronologic
Dark Necrofear
Testament
Marville
~kaos~
Logic_4Dub
Genuinely Speaking

That was me and X-Vision

…This guys is a twink….. Cal's talent? ain't hard to tell he rides on the brink… So watch Reed 'extract ya soul thru ya iris' - but don't let life 'pass you by in a blink'… *wink*
…Why join this tourney dog, you've come to die… Cal similar to 'patients of a face lift' - stayin 'under knives' so wit the twist of a blade Reed'll leave ya 'stomach in more folds' than 'hunger strike'
…This G's toast…… keep yah life? dog you'll need hope - cause Reed gonna 'peel the skin from ya ribs' and leave more 'pink on ya side' than a fuckin 'beans post'

11th Dynasty vs Logic_4Dub, 13th Apostle, NYVillan, Olorun, Damien



these fuckaz on the verge of extinction.

yo,


yo,



Dynasty Returns

with one stroke,
ok folkz thats our opening act so, RF escort em off stage or backdoor lets sit back & grab popcorn snacks, relax & clap for
my punches arrive as Ms. Trinidad & Tobago; Both Lands Across Yur Chest like her sash.. ina beauty pageant show!
break apart these losers, Apostle I’ll prove first yu a nuisance who chews works; call it ya trademark maneuver
so lemme wash all rumours ( my cockspan, your mouth ) go together like latest gossip talks at the office water cooler! whoa.
yu a coward a hater nobody respected, praised, or felt.. ya verse mimics mine its sad plz make a name for yourself. &
stop impersonating or else. our reps? this bar separates yurs from mine - like our groceries at the checkout counter’s conveyor belt!
8 against 1? Nobody told me this was a battle of sexes. facing me? is ya economics exam: Answer shows no sign of interest
so many bullets shot into ya its wreckage, till ya bodys held up by metal like crowd surfing at a prosthetic limb convention.
Im calling everyone out to my wood its a termites town hall meeting. Supremace a horror-flick extra, walkin around bleeding
shouting & screaming, pouting & pleading. ‘Sup already wet on the ground like a Welcome Mat & Its Pouring This Evening!
^ check that nameflip, Logic next to get it too.. chincheck I been wreckin goons in text its you who gets dismembered in two
its simple yet true, Logs already showing signs of Help like a castaway’s signal for rescue! ( save me! )
think of me as ya new sheriff in town; kill ya in just 1 step [oops] I peeked & turned early at a western showdown
force yu both to go down . till - Mace is on top of Sup - no thanks I don’t want pepper on my hashbrowns!
teflon style in the ring; stick & move, swing left then stop. Shivas a prize fighter Im holyfields boss, I train with cement blocks
Uppercuts & jabs come see me box. watch my every move as I deliver hooks like I sent singing telegrams to a peeping tom..
i push forth fists & without notice order hits; hand to hand combat I cant lose its what mercy to double jointed fingerbones is
so take this suicide letter b4 yu kill yoself bitch; sign ya own note like field trip permission slip from a homeschooler kid!
arsenal of stabs, opened his mouth so I stuck a blade in the esophagus path, mistaken for sword swallowing carnival act
don’t worry RF, if ya want garbage cast heres - ANSWER to the rescue - like the practical portion of a lifeguard exam!
blades pick apart ya face & jaw ya slained from the start, cuz Olorun Im surgical with this I cut off ya heart, then
dismember ya extremities further causing harm. till.. Runs out on a limb - like a deadbeat dad that named his son: Arm. ( lol. )
Im HEROLIKE. kiss each one of ya girlies at the finish, callin ya bitch for head like museums callin Jackie o nassis
monitor ya ego & arrogance - Soon as it gasses up, ill bury it – as what airbubbles trapped in quicksand is!


HAHAHAHA muthafuckaz. by the grace of god,

check it ~ my shows create moshpits, where even ya parents get involved in it like science fair projects
words fire on page create arson, set off a series of reactions as baking soda & seltzer water unite inside ya parents apartment.
Act up & get burnt for it. my knuckles. demand to open up every body .. like a forensic cop with a search warrant
Rite say some of ya lines out loud just for assurance: “few chore rat tisk” - huh ? sounds like down syndrome talk, & yur pic confirms it. lmfao

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^ Rite looks like a milkdud with glasses so thick he can see the next 3 votes drop in place, better part of ya retarded face
looks mentally challenged, hey thats just honest & straight. Took a pic in a car lot … school finally gave him a handicap parking space. ( heh )
got wide range of weapons such as harpoon hooks, sling shots, & glocks .. turn ya scud missles to dud pistols still wanna talk?
shootouts in parking lots; move around the corner & return clips from the outside like a video rental drop box!
villain ya forceplays I mean wordplays worthless form has no gain. grab ya head, -squeeze thru the middle- my pet peeve for toothpaste usage
now yu knocked out in pain. even new yorks bitch gon be seeing stars like the fuckin statue of liberty.. on july fourth day!
Hate to keep insultin yur.. style.. but decorations are dead, let go its done - over. now ya flesh eyen vultures ..
show up to yur hood wit knifetype structures, ready to pick apart ya block & bring life to it like a fuckin ice sculpture!

Closing Remarks :

Bury em alive ina casket at the morgue, soon as the lid closes its gonna be over..
- keep a hand out before it shuts - like courtesy hotel guests soon as they hear: hold the elevator!


too late.



Officially whored.


Yours Truly,

shivas HeroLike

Looooooollll

This is the only Kaos verse I have, I think. It's from FA's first freeflow. I left my verse off of it

Ackuracy

....im servin the streets, its like 'givin head in gravel' cuz puttin the 'game on ya shoulders' is 'hurtin ya knees'...
acks murkin wit ease, leavin nth apex 'Caught, with they pants down' like the 'prostitutes workin for police'!!....
...uphold a cold flow so im 'certain in freeze', while im paintin violence to see the 'art of choke' stop ya breathin...
ought to beat em, n the next day ya 'GET OUT!!, on the wrong side of the bed' like 'Wife caught ya cheatin'!!...
...ive sought to eat them with no thought or reason, they copyin my shit, soon as bars land they stay cloned...
look, my advice is to stay home cuz when i step up its a 'call of the wild' more then 'tarzan wit pay phones'!!...
...peep the loud shit, im 'raisein Kain' better then 'Eve after goin to parental Theropy', thats when the Doudts hit...
when i force him off a cliff its like 'god when he got lazy wit adams body'...cuz dynas makin 'no bones, about it'!!...
...listen here, FA is a form of brumuta cuz all those who 'Tri(y), Disappear'...im the spawn of satan n this sinners fertile...
leave ya a reck tangled in hate, then ya 'back to Square one' righ after ya 'outlined in more chalk' then 'my winners Circle'!!...
...not meanin good luck when i say break a leg, arm, and neck with no strings attached so don't think the sowings free...
yall trying to judge without even knowing me, n thats 'Startin off on the wrong foot' more then 'Rookie bowling leagues'!!...
...this thin line is like 'Buddah with thigh cramps' cuz ya not 'crossin it anymore' so don't act like youve not heard this...
speakin of 'feelin cramps', let me put it in the 'Words of Achein(Akin)' cuz ill basically have ya 'Feelin the WORSEST'!!...
...tryin to ignore what these herbs say, but i wanna 'blow out the Candles' on 'maces Party mouth' in the worst way...
then with jus one snap of the fingers ill have 'Sumthin parked outside his crib' like 'its his Sixteenth birthday'!!...
...back shots till ya spine hurt, yall needa 'work, on ya image' like 'graphics designers', i put heads to rest ya bastids...
betta think fast bitch, im all about the benjimans but you'll 'pay me with if ya life' if 'nuttins certain but death and taxes'!!...


Kaos

derived from a seed of eloquence . . my style develops words into the sheer form of elegance
without hesitance . . we'll see what ya really made of -
when I "Break Down Ya Calm Position (composition)" faster than "Yoga Instructors" separating the "Molecules Of An Element"

pulverize ya liver . . compactin' the jelly . . punches to the gut stay attackin' ya belly
ya crews nothin' more than a bunch of has bins -
so you better then us . . ha – your more “Full Of Baloney” than “Fat Kids On Their Way Back From The Deli

so exceeded with ownage . . I swear your the weakest opponent
I'll end your life so fast -
they'll have to "Fabricate Commercial Attires" into "Instant Infernos" - cause I'll leave ya "100% Cotton, The Heat Of The Moment"

this kid, is simply abused . . and I take money bitch, so gimme the loot
with shovels inside and out ya frame -
kaos "Dig Up Ya X Tear Eeyore (exterior)" like "Crying Ya Eyes Out" - on "Treasure Hunts With Winnie The Pooh"

spittin those essential key raps . . you try to keep ya wackness private but even the most confidential see that
and if memory serves me correctly -
I'll "Reply To Cerebral Emails" while doing "Lengths In Swimming Pools" - now how's that for a "Mental Re: Laps"

we launch missles from cannons . . play pass with ya anger problems - throwin a temper tantrum
I got lines so sick -
all they'll have left to say is "O, Snap" like "Quarter Backs Singing The Canadian Anthem"

this is my house . . you'll die now . . let phantom in ya crew ? . . that's the reason people hold try outs
but its obvious they have no "Cry Teary, Yeah" and I don’t mean the "Acknowledgement Of Ballin' Ya Eyes Out"

my rhymes are fatal keys . . on the other hand, ya skills a myth . . not even a fable, see ?
these fags are such pussies . . everyone in their crew is a "Sweeter Sap" than how they make "Syrup From Maple Trees"

kaos stay pumpin heat abundantly . . y'all try to keep up - but find it hard to run with me
punches be quick to "Nick A Teen"
so wenever I drop . . people be sayin "Holly Smokes" faster then a "Christain Tobacco Company"

after this night is through . . you'll see which group of heads are the righteous crew
Nth Apex is garbage -
so i'll "Ridicule Ghosts From Zelda" using a "Simile For Sheep" and literally "Diss Poes The Likes Of Ewe”

It's stuff like this where I never understood why people thought it was dope. Even back then, I was always trying to get people to dial it back. Well executed wordplay is more elegant than just taking a multisyllabic word and breaking it down into phonically similar sounding words and ignoring the context altogether

http://www.projectrhyme.com/forums/f34/

our HOF is full of longbar from the early 2000s

Lol I used to be on goldmic bolding multis and shit. Longbar couldn't convert to a beat whatsoever, is why I was down to switch so quickly.

long bar was fun

lmao. my only longbar battle verse i have on here is vs. @Dominate on IHH circa 2007(?).. i remember losing pretty substantially

Dominate aka I'm_Pissed.

ha,

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.
.

Ya bringin' jus trash, a washed up vet testin' lets grave builders dig in the grass, so might as well ‘add that^ verse to ya will’ cuz it's ‘a dead give-away; you're a thing of the passed’ …
kickin‘ ya ass, c'mon dawg.. ya crummy puns ass, stop, plus you the first one jumpin‘ on black's jock - i mean .. dude give such 'HypeRaise on my drops', you'd think he was a ‘bungee jump mascot’ …
Past hot, my scripts blister red .. bitch seen i dropped; glimpsed, flinched & fled .. cuz once this diss verse read - for ‘real, Pissed'll stay off the computer’ .. like .. ‘HITS picture thread’ [ko?]
lynch your neck & have ya mandibles tore D, lately everything ya rappin's either whack or just corny .. half baked concepts flexed as you ‘foursome, out the ass’, kinda like ‘strictly vaginal orgies’ …
Dismantle 'em shortly, nate straight fake in his writtens .. kid's labeled a misprint, blade in his rib, then watch as ‘DahmerJizz with the after-life’ til it resembles ‘Jeffrey rapin‘ his victims’ …
take him n' mince up the whore n' his flipped keys, votes in, now yall catch this dork givin‘ wished pleas .. cry his eyes out & ‘throw a bitch fit at the crowd’, like ‘hoes performing a strip tease’ …
Whorin' em, swift ease .. ya text's snoozin, bored shit, ya best groove gets floored kid - cuz ya mission to win's like ‘swines breastfeeding cows’, how? .. it's ‘BessTo a-BoarTit’ …
have ya chest doin orbits, prepare for destruction .. now quit that parody junk, son .. Disc show his skill ‘so poor’, it's like ‘all ya DoughNate, went to Black’ without ‘AIDS charity functions’ …




jesus

To be honest, a lot of dope goldmic heads did 'long bar' but none of the flashy underline gimmicky italics was really used. I'm friends with Problem, and he's actually dope. Metaphive who is on here is probably the best 'battler'. Some people think I'm really good, but I think it's sort of lame, and I think I'd fare quite alright. No disrespect to people that battle blah blah majority of site, whatever. Short bar heads aren't amazing either, the same amount of 'long bar' users (very few) are dope, and equal to the amount of 'short bar' users, honestly. A lot suck. And if you're actually verbally saying a lot of these bars outloud and if you're good at longbar, it can easily be said just as clean as you think a shortbar would sound like. But I must admit the exterior eeyore wordplay was absolutely horrid and I can't believe someone would actually try to play that off as good. Desperate times. Desperate measures. And I commend short bar users that very rarely used stretched wordplay.

the only ppl i really remember from those days is Sha77er S7ar, Mr Devil666, and Hellucinations

that was a sad time for txt...well, a sadder time for text

No idiot, do not try put words in my mouth. you cast a vote on who had the better entire verse, if a punch doesn't rhyme it's not effective. your attitude was exactly why longbar was full of irrelevant filler and forced multis.

plus if you ever thought decorations were cool, you never will be,

Oh, okay. I didn't know rhyming was hard. I hear there are guys out there who rhyme with more than just one syllable. That sounds REALLY hard! It's a MUCH better display of writing ability than using wordplay and writing punches! I bet you're one of those guys? You must be, since you're such an expert at relevant filler and non-forced multis

let's look

Rhyming In it with Lyrics? Brilliant. Hardly forced at all. And that whole "Mother fuck this battle" part was great, too. That was great, relevant stuff. Not fillerish at all! And you're chewing through his lyrics....it's like he's got lyrics written down on a piece of paper and you're just eating the shit. nom nom nom big fella! you get your grub on!

We know the truth! We sure do! We know the truth! How bout you?! This stuff just gets me giddy in my glovebox. Your set-ups are epic, dude. Words and Girl? Perfect rhymez bro!

Clear enough and really tough? Well, multis are overrated anyway. Man, I gotta say I agree with you, though - Hush is sooo not tough. Like totally. I'm so glad you went out of your way to mention it in your verse, because I was thinking the same thing before I read it, and then I was just like OH! Dude! HE SAID IT!

Hush, you un-tough fuck


End of the day:

Short line heads use filler and forced multis all the same. You're really just going out of your way to try create more contrasts between the two than there really are

Funny thing is, people use to actually vote on longbar - (20-30 bars). while now days you can't get a vote on 5.

:/

Whoaaaaaaaaaaaa
but yeah when I was deep into it, my battles would get over 100 votes at times. at least 20
People used to complain about only getting 20 votes

Seyance, seriously... how about mentioning bars when you're actually capable of thinking some good ones up? k, pum'kin...

;)

Wow, this thread sucks.

lol

I shouldn't have done it.

Someone post a Damien aka D.Omen verse please.