Noodle- Father Forgive Me (gangster rap alter ego)
 

https://soundcloud.com/newdle-1/father-forgive-me


here are the lyrics for those who don't wanna click the link:
hell yeah i got a pistol,
leave your body like a bunch a scrambled words...riddled
and it hurts a whole lot, not a little
reese's pieces in that body bag….skittles

simple niggas gotta EAT, nibbles
caught a charge, till i had it beat, cripples
rockin' ankle bracelets while i'm flying continental
if the feds spyin', i'm supplyin driving in a rental

niggas tell me keep my rap P.C.
Please, i got more crack than streets in DC
serve fiends unconcerned with he she
4th kind, get abducted when you turn and see beams

been rubber band tossin' since 8th grade
for real, nigga flossin' like he just ate steak
look in my eyes, you can tell he's trouble
got work, so much weight make a nigga's knees buckle

verse 2
they ask "noodle…what you do when it ENDS?"
shit, i got enough diesel to fuel a BENZ"
a lint-free cloth, no clues or prints
just my two cents, won't catch me doin' a bid

i'm hot homeboy, between ya bitches legs
hot buns need butter, she's willin' to spread
I got an A+ when it comes to Kitchen Ed
Noodle got the skillet, and i'm fryin other nigga's eggs

drunk in the club, let a nigga say somethin'
i'll have him FALL VICTIM like a nigga base jumpin'
…no parachute, i don't care for you
the only impact i make'll knock you out your pair of boots


homies call me kobe, proud gunna
i'll put 4 shells in a rat…cowabunga
they'll never find you in the mountain that you're under
desert eagle make it rain, norse god, thunder

hahaha, nothin? i drop this shit in the middle of hater nation, and nobody has ANYTHING to say?

I wanna care....i even tried to read sum....i just hate comedy rap

the only thing funny about this is the fact that i'm the furthest away from the lifestyle. you decided you didn't like it before actually giving it a listen.

not tight.

Lol. Cute.

Well sadweather u guilted me.


Shit was cool. That hood hop beat is dumb hard & that cowabunga shit was bonkers. Sum other lines grabbed my attention too. Was cool.

Your production has gotten way better. Some of the lyrics were dope, some corny. Not feeling the chorus. Your progressing tho. Keep goin

thanks bros...it seems i'm more comfortable when i'm not serious.

sik, i also hate the chorus, but...i don't care about noodle's character development. just kinda stepping back from myself to make my serious side get some more dimensions.

Few comments... pretty muddy mix, very bass-centric, not much use of high frequencies... ie the snare sounds like it's got a LPF on it then been compressed to fuggery. EQing your instruments to give everything its own space will help, also sidechaining your bass to the kick so they aint masking each other will give you a nice pumpin sound.

Beat had me noddin tho but when those hey heys goin on they're masking the lead vox, so you need to either pull them down in the mix, or push your lead vox up a few dB for the chorus... for extra clarity, find a way to EQ them to not be competing for the same frequencies.

Finally, work on ya lyrics bro, that not a little and nibble shit was just awful.

Makes me wanna get new equipment

Sik that sig quote made me lol irl srs

download an instrumental, and rap over it.

i'm not an engineer. wanna mix it for me?

Me too! Had to share it with everyone

Fair nuff, can't do much without the stems really. In that case I'd say just turn your vox up by maybe 2dB, that'll at least help a little with hearin you over those big heys

lmfao i actually thought this was entertaining as fuck and pretty decent. schemes were kind of off in some spots, and could use certain annunciations on some shit to make it sound more g.

i enjoyed it aha, keep it up g.

let a nigga say somethin'
and i'll make him fall victim like a nigga base jumpin'

i tend to be a fan of badweather

i thought it was dope, dont think anything is wrong with your lyrics u do what you want to do and it comes thru i the songs you make

anyway nice job man


the shells shit was doppeee

Noodle 'bout to go viral, bros