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dyedinthewool 05-24-2020 12:24 AM

I come in threes.
 
Thorny cells invade
Gardened organs with loose clots.
We gasp for respite


Pink bubbles and rays
Rouse the sidewalk chalk brigade.
Youth escaping the wait


Wishing in rosé
My lips feel the pipe dreams fizz:
essential stupor



Hope everyone is safe.

Inno 05-24-2020 03:13 PM

Good to see you back around here. It’s fat btw

All three are dope I like the 3rd one the most tho.

Smh thought you was gonna slide in without notice ? Lol

Hope to see more from you homie.

Exis 05-25-2020 08:18 AM

Pink bubbles and rays
Rouse the sidewalk chalk brigade.
Youth escaping the wait

If you don't have some poems to throw up containin' greatness, I'll be shocked...

Scar 05-26-2020 10:26 PM

"Wishing in rosé"

that was awesome. thanks for sharing, sir.

Adverse 05-26-2020 10:50 PM

Really loved the imagery here, descriptive and the colors all popped it was like staring at a rainbow. I’ve never met you but you have made a fan out of me.

dyedinthewool 05-27-2020 03:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Inno (Post 772592)
Good to see you back around here. It’s fat btw

All three are dope I like the 3rd one the most tho.

Smh thought you was gonna slide in without notice ? Lol

Hope to see more from you homie.

LOL

I was hoping my very veeeerryyy discrete and subtle drop would ignite a haiku rumble

dyedinthewool 05-27-2020 03:47 AM

How are you J? @Inno
Thanks for the feedback everyone. Trying to wiggle out the rust!

Witty 06-01-2020 11:55 AM

Wishing in rosé
My lips feel the pipe dreams fizz:
essential stupor

This is really good. Essential stupor was powerful.

big baby 06-07-2020 08:46 PM

bags also comes in threes lmaooooo stupa idiyote

corleone 06-08-2020 12:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Inno (Post 772592)
Good to see you back around here. It’s fat btw

All three are dope I like the 3rd one the most tho.

Smh thought you was gonna slide in without notice ? Lol

Hope to see more from you homie.

lmfaooooooooooooo that was the gayest comment I've ever read. I'm officially leaving netcees.org soon unless some of my old buddies from back in the day wheel me back over here, lol. Omfg.. Your comment was disrespectful, might I add, as well. Have some manners brother. Everybody just wants to have some fun just like you. Peace

Inno 06-08-2020 07:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Corleone (Post 775614)
lmfaooooooooooooo that was the gayest comment I've ever read. I'm officially leaving netcees.org soon unless some of my old buddies from back in the day wheel me back over here, lol. Omfg.. Your comment was disrespectful, might I add, as well. Have some manners brother. Everybody just wants to have some fun just like you. Peace

Wtf are you talking about? I know this person outside of netcees

dyedinthewool 06-08-2020 08:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by big baby (Post 775601)
bags also comes in threes lmaooooo stupa idiyote

Lmao baby da big baby how you doinggggg?!?!? You still around! Estupido foolio

Eŋg 06-09-2020 09:38 PM

these poems are actually poetic. thanks.

dyedinthewool 06-30-2020 05:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eŋg (Post 775852)
these poems are actually poetic. thanks.

Thanks Eng! I think we wrote together one time long ago.

Geno 07-23-2020 02:51 AM

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