Master Rock vs Razah[champ match][Rock wins
NWL:Season I: Week X
Verses ares due: THURSDAY at 11:59 PM EST Voting ends: SUNDAY at 11:59 PM EST Line Limit: Minimum:10 lines, Max: 30 Voting on 2 battles is required. TOPIC: https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/p...ochi1_8111.jpg @Master Rock @Razah |
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Rock has asked for an extension
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Right down to the last breath
left, rather choose death before dishonor, every day I walk through those steps mission, the code of a man's flesh, warrior creed spawned through the shogun's needs however, I will proceed to weed out the malignant seeds while my sword rested bleeds.. I came from the depths of struggle graveling to escape fate but yet I'm caught my daily breath is a symptom of what I have fought against fight or flight, my plight is a beyond your reach or your height deviations insight, stuck in a blade, souls capture... forged in steel I'm enslaved this iron element is seeking out life force's strain no mind, clarity of the brain, I could care less for what one claims in the moment the slices of flesh is the aim warfare is the constraint of my disciplined clan I earned my placement, for this catacomb encasement blade is the capturer of one's soul, swallowing the user whole through the shadows betrothed in warfare for supremacy dominate opposing forces... no empathy striking down every single one of my enemies blade or staff I aim to defeat in regards upon my legacy's behalf I hear the echoes of my ancestors felt as the wind pass empires won't last as this warlord slashes through ranks over corpses, we battle utilizing bodily fluids as paint the master pieces cutting through death's taint now one envisions achieving the manifestation of death becoming acquaint destiny is one step ahead for every try our hands tremble pained from impact's supply of the tremendous meeting of when our blades collide this showdown cuts deep into one's soul the unblinking eyes living by the sword, an ideal way to die no why just when, hell's razors gets purged and exercised the sharpening of our blade, shogun's slave trained to leave blood stains combat stance, transfiguration of the reaper's dance No matter the moves I make,enhanced countered in advance over and over this is the final trance, ritual for blades as we meet the final destination through our circumstance |
Sparks will fly & illuminate the darkest sky
You can hear the iron screaming as shards go by React, speed. Swing- Detach hands, feet. The irony of war, that's when I find myself at, peace. My instinct is clear & concise, I veer to the side Every attack is a combination of my fear & my pride I'm wounded but I'm not concerned that I'm bleeding blood I'd say I'm exhausted but that's a word I don't know the meaning of That's a glimpse into a warrior's soul who was born to be cold But the heat from my anger is scorching the globe They are thorns in my side no remorse for my foes Died with hope in their eyes such a glorious pose I admire your passion, the best of a clan's soldier I've never looked down on a man until I'm forced to stand over Reality replacing your hope, it'll end quick, in misery The last moment of peace, I take a deep breath in- For a whiff, of victory. |
Very tough vote. I actually changed my mind on this vote. Razah's is shorter but the multis and cadence are better.
Rock's is longer and has more meat to it. The more I read it the more I lean toward Master Rock's. I feel the ending is stronger and there's more to the verse. V/ Rock |
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