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DexLabb 06-14-2014 03:55 PM

whole squad on that real shit
 
BEAT; http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBntk3w-ExA

0-to 1-zero-zero,
game needs a saviour i'm the motherfuckin' hero
lot of u don't like me, n' single me out in plural
i love it when they talk shit, least they talkin', u know?

still they wanna act like my shit's not hittin' off
still they pull the rookie card, bitch, i'm cal ripkin
was lost, im now visioned. see it clearer than plasma
if u think black killed it, i'm the theory miasma,

im now different. used to think big and dream bigger
now i dream bigger than my thoughts can picture,
talk that painful stuff and their eyes glaze over,
but when somebody says roadster its just like foldgers,

so i reconsidered. see, we only got how many yearsss
tht champagne in my glass got me a couple cheers
but, whens its over and the chips get raked to 1st place
how long will it take before u see things my way?

lets put the world on tilt, you know, throw it off axis
eat shrooms and watch the galactic acrobatics, n'
share my fuckin' underwater views like snapfish, idk man,
some times i feel like im drowning in captions,

your life, your tweet, your snapchat, your status,
wheres my life fit in the balance, i only got one talent,
and that talent is whatever you think i can't fathom
currently at 1000 fathoms, gaspin under the pressure

still laughin',

ANND, you know who the genius is
u faggits blow more households than katrina diddd
ya'll can sew it, i'll go ahead and reap it bitch,
countin' money thumb greener than a reeferheads'

jus wanna feel 100 million fans swarmin'
n' they look at me like optimus, transformin'
mouths wide open, jawbone wedged
show you what i see when i close my lids, its like

im' the greatest they never seen, septmber scene
like im the freshman, like u gotta have it to get it
sht, the game is paradoxical, n' jus like a waffle cone
theres' way 2 many squares rapped up in the cremé,

wayne said he aint human, well, i'm a machine
u a robocop okay, im cyberdyne. u cant terminate me,
im a plague u cant exterminate me, n' well,
if your attitude is shit go head n' germinate me,
bitch

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Kin 06-14-2014 05:39 PM

I don't really get it man? If you wrote this to this beat then why not record it and post the mix?

We don't know how you would rap to a beat

as far as Tha text you posted...

Pretty simple lines really...nothin' popped out to me..

so to go back to my point being if you posted spitting to the beat it may have worked

My opinion tho'

Peace

Zen 06-14-2014 05:46 PM

You're wasting your time Kin. He's been told this every time he's posted anything.

DexLabb 06-14-2014 10:43 PM

lol, i have recorded verses and posted the soundcloud. some times just wanna enjoy writing

DexLabb 06-15-2014 11:53 AM

but @Kin you're right. imagine 2 chainz posted his lyrics on a forum people would be like...bro, u got the mental issues right?

Hush 06-15-2014 04:44 PM

Nigga u ain't drake lmAo

DexLabb 06-15-2014 11:17 PM

dont act like i dont know lil wayne on a first name basis ight?^


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