Contenders: Suthaveli (5-1) vs Lotto Smirk (4-2) - Lotto Smirk WINS
NBL Season 10 Week 7 Due SUNDAY 1/8/17 Minimum - 12 lines Max - 20 lines - NO BITING - NO FEEDING - NO SWAYING - AGREE ON LINE LIMIT - IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE Don't edit after your opponent has posted. 2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in. Don't be an idiot. Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle. May God have mercy on your souls! |
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Lotto Smirk, check..
Admit it whore, I'm funny & that u're not better than the vet My verses have u like, "a-kee-kee-kee" altho we knw u spent time on editin & prep Last match I took it, extortion.This time it'll b done by flexin the heat.. Just ta hold up squares like u on the block. <--Bitch, welcome ta Sesame St. I gets surgical w.this text shit & start speakin a psycho lang As for ya verses:If ya throw up a set, I'ma murder it as if I were the rival gang U don't wanna start this, truly.Sayin shit like,"Yo, I spark the toolie" Keep playin online solider & I'll show ya just how flawless i am in Call of Duty U're an insect ta me.I'll prove w. an example, just try & focus: ^ U bug me flyin blind w. a short lifespan- Muthafucka, u're a flyin locust! Back down, ur scared of the tension or backslaps'll clear up ur senses A wave from these hands'll manipulate ur structure.. Dr. Strange in the Mirror Diminsion Trust, my swing is wild.I draw 1st blood when time ta start a show ^ & i'll come from outta nowhere w.that signature move... that's a RKO Fade his head like a fresh cut w. A haymaker ta ding his wig It'll crack his side piece so good, it'll knock bitch up & we let him raise the kid |
so what ur 5-1 you'll die son, getting hit with hook after hook
ur safe hands won't defend you at all when my combinations open em up If ya dont listen to the lesson, the big scope'll hurt when it get ya n have ur brain spread in sections all over the wall like a neurosurgical lecture he aint packing heat, catch him spaz out n jolt when i hit him he can finally catch a gun charge when the taser leave him like an epilepsy victim bet u never smoked bud cus ur a puff who'll get blast w/ the shotty so u can get hot boxed after this match, when ya fam decide to cremate ya body Have this lonely folk in the scope, bet he gets bullied in the safe ends put him in his first inner circle,n pull the trigger fore he ever has the chance to make friends aint worthy of a champ shot, ur dumb n ya plain style is lame bro how your punches gonna break the mould,my 3yr old has more creativity w/ playdoh Eagle at my side, aimed high, intent to make ya head hurt you'll be wishing it was a mirage when i make ya lose ya mind to the desert got a long bow for this hoe, dont need guns to blast geek u can die by the aero since he should of fucking slaughtered you last week |
Suth:
I gets surgical w.this text shit & start speakin a psycho lang As for ya verses:If ya throw up a set, I'ma murder it as if I were the rival gang U don't wanna start this, truly.Sayin shit like,"Yo, I spark the toolie" Keep playin online solider & I'll show ya just how flawless i am in Call of Duty Lotto: he aint packing heat, catch him spaz out n jolt when i hit him he can finally catch a gun charge when the taser leave him like an epilepsy victim got a long bow for this hoe, dont need guns to blast geek u can die by the aero since he should of fucking slaughtered you last week vote- suth |
Suth - online soldier, dr. Strange, closer
Lotto - gun charge, hot boxed, break the mould I gotta go with lotto. He was more polished and wording was way cleaner. Also had a couple bars I ALMOST quoted but were too much of a reach. Suth had lotb with that cod shit |
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I have Suthaveli. His verse overall was just worded better and felt less rushed than Lotto. Had a few standouts: Dr. Strange, opener was ok. Lotto had the inner circle and a decent brain/section flip, my only complaint was execution and word choice... you would of got my vote.
vote - suth |
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Damn this is hella close One of the sicker battles this week Suth had some lazy ass wording but creativity was high. Lotto keep improving and had some real nice shit also but did struggle with wording as well I gotta go against the grain here I think lotto edged it Both was hot tho Good as battle V lotto |
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got lotto w maybe 3 good hits that were fresh and landed clean, maybe 2 if im being generous for suth....wasn't feeling suth much this time out, ideas just felt old v lotto |
Back down, ur scared of the tension or backslaps'll clear up ur senses
A wave from these hands'll manipulate ur structure.. Dr. Strange in the Mirror Diminsion Trust, my swing is wild.I draw 1st blood when time ta start a show ^ & i'll come from outta nowhere w.that signature move... that's a RKO Vs If ya dont listen to the lesson, the big scope'll hurt when it get ya n have ur brain spread in sections all over the wall like a neurosurgical lecture he aint packing heat, catch him spaz out n jolt when i hit him he can finally catch a gun charge when the taser leave him like an epilepsy victim Have this lonely folk in the scope, bet he gets bullied in the safe ends put him in his first inner circle,n pull the trigger fore he ever has the chance to make friends V/lotto, this was a cool battle both had some bars i felt, but i thought lotto had the stronger verse, the bars i quoted hit hard & were fire, suth dr strange bar was dope, but i got lotto here, props to both. |
Lotto gets this. I just wasn't feeling much of Suth's verse this week. Lotto had the desert line which was really nice and could've been even better with crisper delivery. Neuro lecture was nice too and a few others were good.
Lotto |
Vote = Lotto.
It came down to style preference quite honestly. so I see why this close: Im a suthaveli fan but i thought his verse this week was tough to follow. example: wave from these hands'll manipulate ur structure.. Dr. Strange in the Mirror Diminsion I know that line got praised but to me that just sounded silly. manipulate someones structure? i dunno man. just too complex/weak association for it to land. I'm a fan of subtle direct punches. this was dope. Fade his head like a fresh cut w. A haymaker ta ding his wig It'll crack his side piece so good, it'll knock bitch up & we let him raise the kid Lotto this week did a great job wording his lines. simple, effective. o what ur 5-1 you'll die son, getting hit with hook after hook ur safe hands won't defend you at all when my combinations open em up If ya dont listen to the lesson, the big scope'll hurt when it get ya n have ur brain spread in sections all over the wall like a neurosurgical lecture he aint packing heat, catch him spaz out n jolt when i hit him he can finally catch a gun charge when the taser leave him like an epilepsy victim Overall I thought lotto was consistent throughout, no real duds to me. both r dope. Suthaveli got a lot of swag though .. & i like he's thinking out of the box so I'll be looking for more from him. |
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