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big baby 12-28-2013 03:52 PM

I'm a feminist. *eats used tampon on stage*
 
sry 4 lackadaisical om's. i have fun.

capture the fervent, miraculous moment
on a camera current, til’ the apertures perfect
this lingering opera, strings the lunar escape
where the future awaits. Lock lips then kiss Cleopatra
Licking my swastika. Everything I do’s a mistake
On a coast, near Trinidad and Tobago
sippin Moscato irreverent to the archipelago
Kill the slightly conscience regime. While the king tries to rebuild
Guilts timer. inhale mightily chilled hyperborean breeze
Kept you in the dark; and what I wrote is sunshine
his throats a punchline. & I spit when I talk
Squeeze my lips to unhinge the double barreled, war
My pen is a subtle cannon sword, tongues fit the syringe.

big baby 12-28-2013 03:54 PM

read @Coup he's good.

Coup 12-28-2013 03:57 PM

this felt all over da place and felt spontaneous on your part...nice snippets here and there.


capture this fervent, miraculous moment
on a camera current, til’ the apertures perfect


what a line

what's your alias?

big baby 12-28-2013 04:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Coup (Post 237554)
this felt all over da place and felt spontaneous on your part...nice snippets here and there.


capture this fervent, miraculous moment
on a camera current, til’ the apertures perfect


what a line

what's your alias?

don't have one. if you'd like to read it again i think it's less over the place. kudos!

Wise Wiggles 12-28-2013 05:34 PM

I really have nothing bad to say about what I just read.

big baby 12-28-2013 06:53 PM

thanks.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GCdwKhTtNNw

lol


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