Week 1: DynamiCz vs. R!canTheoryz - DYNAMICZ WINS
 

Rules

You know the drill.

Due Dates:
Verses this week are due Friday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours


Line Limit:
Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ


@DynamiCz @R!canTheoryz

Yerpppp

How Many?

Im fine with 8

Home Invasion! Fuk the House, I run inside and actually torch it
Bodies everywhere, Flesh & Bones Hang off the Wall... Family Portrait//
Old Veteran! We don't care how you dump the tech, or when you slump the best
Jail stories in your rocker, but no Mugshot of you in the System... That's Trump Arrest//
Ransom amount a blurred digit! Face shot, your words and speech slurred with it
Drive by! Desert Eagles moving behind the Window, the car look like a Bird Exhibit//
The hood gone witness! Big Sword, your fam just realized the good gone missing
We Left his Legs Inside his Workplace, that's how you should of "Stood on Business"//

Where I’m from? we see Dumb Profits, your investments
Bleed outta pockets,
I’ll Shuttle your future into flames quicker than a Elon rocket.
This Peace is Quickly loaded- ur brain’ll be strictly Roaming,
Fuck the Gun - this Blade’ll Cut & Leave Dy Scattered Everywhere like Hippie Clothing.
Don’t get slapped into patterns thinking it’s a high five,
So Why Lie? ‘we both paint abstract’ & this still wouldn’t end in a Tie, Dye.
a Perfectionist I move Errors -seen my name
Vs U & Instantly Grew terror,
Put your brain in a cap Now you’ll reslly think about adapting to bein in ‘tha New Era’

I thought this was relatively close actually, I loved that opening line from
Dyna conceptually I just thought maybe ‘flesh and blood’ rather than ‘bones’ would have helped him tie it in to the family aspect a little more, but the idea was fresh as fuck to me. I really liked that idea a lot, Trump Arrest and Bird Exhibit were cool, the closet was my least favourite from you in truth but definitely a solid and consistent verse here, nice wording throughout top to bottom.

R!can has improved a lot since I last read him, Shuttle with the current event was good, I enjoyed the nameplays used here with Tie Dye the top pick for me personally from those as I thought the way it was executed with the payoff at the end worked best for that line. This was close for real, I edged it to Dyna overall for his consistency in both the ideas, his wording, and execution - that opening line of his was LOTB for me too which again gave him a slight nod over R!can here.

Vote - Dyna

Family portrait n bird exhibition vs hippie clothing
Ultimately I think Dynamics wording n delivery here was better
Rican was choppy in spots

V. Dynamicz

Home Invasion! Fuk the House, I run inside and actually torch it
Bodies everywhere, Flesh & Bones Hang off the Wall... Family Portrait//
nice
Old Veteran! We don't care how you dump the tech, or when you slump the best
Jail stories in your rocker, but no Mugshot of you in the System... That's Trump Arrest//
good again
Ransom amount a blurred digit! Face shot, your words and speech slurred with it
Drive by! Desert Eagles moving behind the Window, the car look like a Bird Exhibit//
I loved this lol
The hood gone witness! Big Sword, your fam just realized the good gone missing
We Left his Legs Inside his Workplace, that's how you should of "Stood on Business"//
not feeling


Vs


Where I’m from? we see Dumb Profits, your investments
Bleed outta pockets,
I’ll Shuttle your future into flames quicker than a Elon rocket.
had potential for something special but execution lacked
This Peace is Quickly loaded- ur brain’ll be strictly Roaming,
Fuck the Gun - this Blade’ll Cut & Leave Dy Scattered Everywhere like Hippie Clothing.
this was fire
Don’t get slapped into patterns thinking it’s a high five,
So Why Lie? ‘we both paint abstract’ & this still wouldn’t end in a Tie, Dye.
good again
a Perfectionist I move Errors -seen my name
Vs U & Instantly Grew terror,
Put your brain in a cap Now you’ll reslly think about adapting to bein in ‘tha New Era’
nah not feeling it


My favorite battle so far, both came with some heat but DynamiCz was way more consistent in his verse. Good battle overall and I’m impressed with both.


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I had to read this twice.. Very close. Dy had imagery to place you places. Rican verse seemed more direct and played with Dy's name and utilized it in the verse making it feel more directed.
V -Rican

I liked Rican's bars here and thought it's truly a respectable battle verse and he brought it.
I also like his use of Capping the Multis that he wants the reader to execute with more vigor or emphasis. Helps out.

That said, I Thought DynamicZ here wrote the verse o' the week. And I don't even think it's close.
Only knock would be just a slighhhtly corny/ rhyme-repeaty closing line but....
Man this is 7 barz of pure fire that we all should be striving for...

Really like both; candidate for BOTW
Thx for droppin; GL wk 2

Dyna

Opener too similar to leave your blood on the wall like family photos to love it
Mugshot cool
Desert eagles / bird okay.. pretty predictable
Stood on business was okay

Cool to see you back


Rican

Opener ehh I appreciate the current event attempt but I just don't like the concept personally
Hippie clothing cool ish
Tie Die I've done/seen so just not as effective for me personally... Your wording was good tho
But your brain in a cap seems silly to me but concept coolish



Very close battle imo.. I think Dyna edged it