"Why You Mad" (ROUGH) Been putting my laptop to good use, BITCHES!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2BOJCn5k2g0
Just a scratch video for me to listen to a 100 times so I can memorize the verse since this shit hard as fuck. Figured I'd show y'all how much better I am than all of you. Bitches. Edit: here's the beat: https://soundcloud.com/isaac-meyer-3/why-you-mad |
You on drugs in this video? Whether Pharmaceutical or street it seems like you're on some sort of upper.
The carpe diem couplet was pretty slick. The rest was alright. Do you plan on going to a studio to finish it or you gonna do it at home? I plan on going to studios to record from now on. Should the urge to write something hits me. |
Wish I could go to a studio but I'm broke. My roommate has a mic set up we could do some rough recordings but it's hard to motivate someone else to record me and mix me down since he's a certified engineer. This is just a reference video for me so I can remember the verse, but I'll show some people just because I think it's dope.
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Oh yeah, no drugs either. Lol only a little weed.
The line I fucked up was: If you had a while army chalked with demons, I'mma wield the holy Cross when God defeats them |
The beat is ok but you say the same exact shit in all of your songs, “finny never had nothing” type shit it’s a deterrent to ever wanna listen to anything else you put out
Switch up your Contrnt st least damn You’re the poor mans ransom in a really bad way |
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One line was about me being broke. One. And it was half a bar. Ok. |
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if someone gives you their impression of you and it's not what you want then you gotta figure out why, not why they're wrong |
dude u got the nose of gru from despicable me
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You also recycled the sample you used in that beat battle, and you claim you been putting in work lol what work? You recycled a sample lol.
Yo you always criticize criticism. This is why nobody ever leaves your ass any feed. Hang it up. |
Thought the carpe diem flow was vicious as well.
U need to record this seriously and put it out. Ill listen. Ripped the beat tho. Props |
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Get more creative. Stop rapping about your life struggle in every song. Nobody wanna hear about that shit.
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Ignore me, I’m just mad bro
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Trade you mixing for a beat whenever you got somethin' for me
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Pm me a link to your beats fam. |
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