Netcees - Lotto Smirk (3-2) vs Legion (3-2)

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Lotto Smirk (3-2) vs Legion (3-2) - Lotto Smirk WINS

NBL Season 10
Week 6

Due FRIDAY 12/30/16

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE

Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

Only seen this I'm going 12 no pics unless u drop first

I can get 10 up been mad busy?

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Originally Posted by Otty (Post 613582)

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Axe over ya head ready for the chop, for being so fucking wack
So I'll give you a decent execution since your punches always lacking that
This no game I'm strapped up to my eyes , this geek just made his deathbed
Cus the tech'll have the gun up in ya face quicker than any vr headset
Bet u drink dirty water, fuck this tramp,beat him w/ ease
Legion air sickness nah he's got more chance dying from that disease
U ain't top tier or on my radar, I'll show u why ur hopeless
Rican bit ur campfire concept The same week u used it n no1 even noticed
I'm celebrating 2016, while my crew'll end u soon queer
Every one of em'll raise arms in circle n make sure u don't make it to new year

Meh key 10 I got drunk last night and forgot all about this again.

You don't have bars. Your mod status won't win this time.
I'm ice cold while you're having a meltdown over 16 lines.
You're a faggot and We're better without your waste of a verse.
We can die happy knowing I wiped that Smirk off the face of the Earth.
You're a video game nerd. ya girl surrounds the pipe.
I bomber on the marble top. That's a counter strike.
If you're competition than we're all fucked. Cmon man.
I rock with the best and you're in a shitty garage band.
And All I'm doing is trying my wackest for 'em on here.
All you do is mod the battle arena, the wackest forum on here.

ls
legion air sickness was coo
also fuckin w/ the campfire concept personal, it hit nice

vs

mostly old ideas in a thrown together verse
smirk off the face of the earth? counter strike? come on
u should kno better

v/lotto

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk (Post 613592)

Axe over ya head ready for the chop, for being so fucking wack
So I'll give you a decent execution since your punches always lacking that
Bet u drink dirty water, fuck this tramp,beat him w/ ease
Legion air sickness nah he's got more chance dying from that disease
U ain't top tier or on my radar, I'll show u why ur hopeless
Rican bit ur campfire concept The same week u used it n no1 even noticed

Decent keystyle, but your wording ruined that VR bar & your closer was just bland.

versus

Quote:

Originally Posted by Otty (Post 613601)

You don't have bars. Your mod status won't win this time.
I'm ice cold while you're having a meltdown over 16 lines.
And All I'm doing is trying my wackest for 'em on here.
All you do is mod the battle arena, the wackest forum on here.

Opener's cool & the closer's just a statement, but hit due to harshness.

LOTTO SMIRK took this one w/ some sold puns, while Otty/Legion used some super played concepts.

I can quote Lotto whole verse, minus the last bar. I can only quote otty first bar, everything else was very played in concepts & in form of execution.
@Lotto Smirk

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk (Post 613592)

Axe over ya head ready for the chop, for being so fucking wack
So I'll give you a decent execution since your punches always lacking that
--eh
This no game I'm strapped up to my eyes , this geek just made his deathbed
Cus the tech'll have the gun up in ya face quicker than any vr headset
--ok
Bet u drink dirty water, fuck this tramp,beat him w/ ease
Legion air sickness nah he's got more chance dying from that disease
---hmm ok cool
U ain't top tier or on my radar, I'll show u why ur hopeless
Rican bit ur campfire concept The same week u used it n no1 even noticed
---lol
I'm celebrating 2016, while my crew'll end u soon queer
Every one of em'll raise arms in circle n make sure u don't make it to new year
--eh

Meh key 10 I got drunk last night and forgot all about this again.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Otty (Post 613601)

You don't have bars. Your mod status won't win this time.
I'm ice cold while you're having a meltdown over 16 lines.
---nah
You're a faggot and We're better without your waste of a verse.
We can die happy knowing I wiped that Smirk off the face of the Earth.
--eh
You're a video game nerd. ya girl surrounds the pipe.
I bomber on the marble top. That's a counter strike.
--um ok
If you're competition than we're all fucked. Cmon man.
I rock with the best and you're in a shitty garage band.
--no
And All I'm doing is trying my wackest for 'em on here.
All you do is mod the battle arena, the wackest forum on here
--ok
.

Smirk barely

Bet u drink dirty water, fuck this tramp,beat him w/ ease
Legion air sickness nah he's got more chance dying from that disease
U ain't top tier or on my radar, I'll show u why ur hopeless
Rican bit ur campfire concept The same week u used it n no1 even noticed

vs

You don't have bars. Your mod status won't win this time.
I'm ice cold while you're having a meltdown over 16 lines.
And All I'm doing is trying my wackest for 'em on here.
All you do is mod the battle arena, the wackest forum on here.

too close. both went hard on each other.. it came down to line of the battle.
The one bolded was kinda funny so I'm gonna let that decide it

vote - Lotto Smirk. this could go either way based on voter preference.