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Geno 07-18-2013 08:19 PM

NYCSPITZ vs GENOCIDE [NYCSPITZ WINS]
 
TOPICAL KEYS TO GREATNESS

Welcome to the 1st Round

Cascading failures

15 minutes to write 10 lines

G'Luck and make it dope

@NYCSPITZ

Geno 07-18-2013 08:29 PM

to many bumps in the road, toes stubbed in the wholes
aint seen a win -win situation in years, nor a comforting zone
trumpets are blown, of which the prisoner doesnt condone
cause he just split a niggas wig when all he wants is the phone
something explodes, blows up in his brain the moment he snaps
went on a murder spree and bodies cascaded, theres no going back
every opponant he's had gets sent straight to hell when hes focussed
hes a fucking hothead, that why his 10x10 fucking cell is the coldest
felonies open, still facing trial and court dates are to come
at this point hell never be free, and die of old age in his bunk

NYCSPITZ 07-18-2013 08:36 PM

The all knowing source gives us water and terra for use
Tesla swag stopped. Monopolistic lightning era of Zeus
Black alchemy morphs criminals to chimera abuse
Bus hits. IPhone starin', this era's aloof
It's backwards: lipstick brushin, mascara in tubes
Camoflauge Northface, search the Sahara for Moose
The flipside of extroverted techies, sterile recluse.
Dead silence. NASA shotgunning feral abuse
As technology levels up, explodin barrel of two
Humanity evolves yeah, but there's peril in youth
Mushroom clouds Nagasaki blind sclera profuse.

Spoken 07-18-2013 08:39 PM

V/ NYC

Rawn M.D. 07-18-2013 08:40 PM

V/nyc
this was dope tho

Darth Yoda 07-18-2013 08:40 PM

Very good indeed from both of you! Wow! Genocide you are seriously impressing me! I love your storytelling. It is very top notch. spitz is also very impressive, i love the shortness but such imagery, the lower half your verse totally dominated! NASA and nagasaki, wow, mindblown. So close!

I'm going to have to go with genocide on this one!

Darth Yoda 07-18-2013 08:42 PM

Yes, NYC absolutely went on another mode towards the last part.

SiK 07-18-2013 08:44 PM

V/Geno

Meth 07-18-2013 08:48 PM

New York City

Fart 07-18-2013 08:49 PM

idk tbh. but i read em for what its worth

Adonis 07-18-2013 08:50 PM

Fuckin dope battle. Both these verses are dope in every facet

Very tough battle. One ruggid swag type story. The other was about the populace and our new age of vanity, with depth to it. Both had damn near perfect flows.

This is the champ match, cause you should both advance although I haven't read my opponents.

V NYC simply because to have this much depth, meat if you will, with all these thoughts and concepts in a short period of time to write for is very difficult. Close as fuck though. Two masterpieces in all honesty

Spoken 07-18-2013 08:53 PM

NYC wins

Geno 07-18-2013 08:55 PM

great verse nyc.

Split 07-18-2013 08:58 PM

Wow


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