murda vs DMS - MURDA SHO WINS
The Summer Classic ‘18 The Premier Text Battling Tournament @murda sho @Emm Kay Gee @DMS Rules Due Dates:
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I’m a battle beast watch this boy’s straight essence daze knights, I’ll knock anyone rude off and deliver presence like slay flights. Emm Kay Gee, only here cus of NS, so without armor sufficient I’m pushing through When I’m strapped with arms I’ll dispatch my plot, you know, do what you couldn’t do No way he’ll trample me, he wouldn’t champ a league of dummies The only way he’ll bounce back to his original place is on a trampoline or bungee And Murda getting wrecked in the three way, this dumb man can just suck it He’s getting so many ‘Dole Dippers’ in the plantation, he’s called the banana republics Think moving, cus his back was getting a heavy load with two men in a truck He’s more filled with strange substances than an abandoned chemical dump |
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Look this thread is just odd bro, fuck Lenox and Bongo... When this 9 blow it got a kik that’d make him forget the rest of his convos Nerd niggas dance when I’m dumpin or I’ll cripple you punks then Hit ya block boy and what I shoot will have em kickin and jumpin Could sit him or slump him then once Kay is dead this lame is next Ima make this lead slide into DMs like “hey bighead” Emm has got a hound! when I saw his chick the way I felt was kinda down Cause that bitch wouldn’t hear “good lookin” if she helped somebody out Ima spray at his whip then his next battle he’ll be great at this shit You’ll see improvement cause them EKG lines will be straight after this Zip Em Up! |
I’m a battle beast watch this boy’s straight essence daze knights,
I’ll knock anyone rude off and deliver presence like slay flights. very outdated and played w/p tbh, meh open Emm Kay Gee, only here cus of NS, so without armor sufficient I’m pushing through When I’m strapped with arms I’ll dispatch my plot, you know, do what you couldn’t do okay angle, prob been done with the Plot ref tho.. bit easy and straightforward for a personal No way he’ll trample me, he wouldn’t champ a league of dummies The only way he’ll bounce back to his original place is on a trampoline or bungee lol dece meta.. wording was strong , the actual punch of 'bouncing back to his original place' was a bit light tho And Murda getting wrecked in the three way, this dumb man can just suck it He’s getting so many ‘Dole Dippers’ in the plantation, he’s called the banana republics lolish idea, bit out there... okay Think moving, cus his back was getting a heavy load with two men in a truck He’s more filled with strange substances than an abandoned chemical dump nah, not feelin the closer .. the two men in a truck / load tie in was fine, but 'strange substances' was a bit of a reach imo for the concept vs. Look this thread is just odd bro, fuck Lenox and Bongo... When this 9 blow it got a kik that’d make him forget the rest of his convos pretty dece open.. cool attack line with a good tie in Nerd niggas dance when I’m dumpin or I’ll cripple you punks then Hit ya block boy and what I shoot will have em kickin and jumpin okay, pretty dece attack line and concept Could sit him or slump him then once Kay is dead this lame is next Ima make this lead slide into DMs like “hey bighead” nah I did this in the cypher on DMs and thought it was a lot cleaner, so this missed for me Emm has got a hound! when I saw his chick the way I felt was kinda down Cause that bitch wouldn’t hear “good lookin” if she helped somebody out lol, like this idea... feel the wording could've been better, but still dig it Ima spray at his whip then his next battle he’ll be great at this shit You’ll see improvement cause them EKG lines will be straight after this pretty solid nameplay and flip... dece finisher Cool battle... fairly close as both had some pretty solid lines but no real banger simo.. I;ev gotta give the edge to Murda Sho for being a bit more consistent & because I liked his concepts a tad better... props to both Vote - Murda Sho |
I’m a battle beast watch this boy’s straight essence daze knights,
I’ll knock anyone rude off and deliver presence like slay flights. wasnt feelin this Emm Kay Gee, only here cus of NS, so without armor sufficient I’m pushing through When I’m strapped with arms I’ll dispatch my plot, you know, do what you couldn’t do not good No way he’ll trample me, he wouldn’t champ a league of dummies The only way he’ll bounce back to his original place is on a trampoline or bungee lmao so stupid but I liked it And Murda getting wrecked in the three way, this dumb man can just suck it He’s getting so many ‘Dole Dippers’ in the plantation, he’s called the banana republics decent Think moving, cus his back was getting a heavy load with two men in a truck He’s more filled with strange substances than an abandoned chemical dump ok Vs Look this thread is just odd bro, fuck Lenox and Bongo... When this 9 blow it got a kik that’d make him forget the rest of his convos this was cool Nerd niggas dance when I’m dumpin or I’ll cripple you punks then Hit ya block boy and what I shoot will have em kickin and jumpin alrighht Could sit him or slump him then once Kay is dead this lame is next Ima make this lead slide into DMs like “hey bighead” gone @ hey big head. This wasn’t good tho Emm has got a hound! when I saw his chick the way I felt was kinda down Cause that bitch wouldn’t hear “good lookin” if she helped somebody out decent Ima spray at his whip then his next battle he’ll be great at this shit You’ll see improvement cause them EKG lines will be straight after this good here DMS had an ok verse but first two bars were misses. Murda didn’t have anything explosive but he had no misses and that opener was nice. Cool bsttle here Vote murda sho |
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literally this was a landslide fuck calling these shits even if they aren't dms got bodied i felt like i stepped into a time warp w those ancient concepts, contrived scenarios and just overall poor wording. tf is a dole dipper? the world may never know. was happy to see sho is still a little bit better than average tho. v sho |
I’m a battle beast watch this boy’s straight essence daze knights,
I’ll knock anyone rude off and deliver presence like slay flights. -nah man Emm Kay Gee, only here cus of NS, so without armor sufficient I’m pushing through When I’m strapped with arms I’ll dispatch my plot, you know, do what you couldn’t do -i like this No way he’ll trample me, he wouldn’t champ a league of dummies The only way he’ll bounce back to his original place is on a trampoline or bungee -nah fam And Murda getting wrecked in the three way, this dumb man can just suck it He’s getting so many ‘Dole Dippers’ in the plantation, he’s called the banana republics -not feeling this Think moving, cus his back was getting a heavy load with two men in a truck He’s more filled with strange substances than an abandoned chemical dump - this was light at best vs Look this thread is just odd bro, fuck Lenox and Bongo... When this 9 blow it got a kik that’d make him forget the rest of his convos -nasty Nerd niggas dance when I’m dumpin or I’ll cripple you punks then Hit ya block boy and what I shoot will have em kickin and jumpin -ok Could sit him or slump him then once Kay is dead this lame is next Ima make this lead slide into DMs like “hey bighead” -fire Emm has got a hound! when I saw his chick the way I felt was kinda down Cause that bitch wouldn’t hear “good lookin” if she helped somebody out -i like this Ima spray at his whip then his next battle he’ll be great at this shit You’ll see improvement cause them EKG lines will be straight after this -decent v-Murda sho. DMS was alil over matched in this one. |
DMS - strange substance was cool, nothing besides that hit. Keep elevating and battling. You got some cool concepts, now you just need to get that wording down packed. It'll come with time.
murda - showed out here. Don't even look like you need a dust any rust b. Kik and hey big head were crazy vote - murda sho |
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