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CtrlF4 05-01-2014 08:00 PM

6. Kwal!ty vs 14. Alvin Karpis - KARP WINS
 
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@KwaL!ty @Alvin Karpis

KwaL!ty 05-01-2014 08:55 PM

Here.. Good luck

Alvin Karpis 05-03-2014 03:32 PM

check


probably 10

KwaL!ty 05-07-2014 02:20 AM

Al didnt make it through Fall Brawl and fell right on his neck
your struggle w/ Cashiuz noted.. worse then Strikta writting a check
Quote:

He ducked me like that kid Quack, we can see P is nervous
You've always been bitch maid, now he owns a cleaning service -Karpis

G what u runnin' for see how scared his words is..
He so bitch maid, .. he probably used to own a cleaning service -Frac
You take bars and concepts then use'em w/ no twist
Everything you post is Common Carp.. and your caught more then those fish
hes had down falls.. but to make playoffs is what i call cheap
Alvin was the first to think Greed is Good.. since that movie on Wall St.
Stealing the bars and still weak.. Are some roids next...?
You better abort or il hide how I get rid of this kid... Worse then Floyd's ex
Quote:

Never seen a fan of ya music, this lame guy acts like a pro
If i wanted to commit suicide, then i'd just stage dive at your show -Karpis

Espi does do concerts, but it's akward cause nobody goes..
So if u wanna commit suicide,.. jus stage dive at one of his shows -Fracture
This biters HOF?.. Il break bones til this actor hurt
Alvin should be an Orthopedic Surgeon.. He's made a career w/ Fracture Work
Youve got mainly ancient concepts.. And all weak odds
The way you've been Roman thru History.. I thought you studied Greek gods
On RB you got your Tail Whipped.. became another wrecked frame
we saw you left in the Dirt By King using stunts..that couldve Won X games

Alvin Karpis 05-07-2014 06:49 PM

yo

I saw the tags, then your pic, and it has me forever grinning
Cuz it’s ironic us going head to head is the only battle you’re ever winning
He’ll tell you he seldom raps & he’s not the guy to embellish facts
& he didn't duck destroyer or get clowned off a site he was never welcomed at
That dome is fuckin huge and I’m surprised at the amount of space
Every time you type “SMH” I can imagine the sweat pouring down ya face
Plus typing..like..this..is..fuckin..lame, stop thinkin it’s hot
Homey you’ll never be Bigg K just cuz you’re the King of the Dots
2nd round murder, covered in blood you’ll get snuffed when I pull it
You’ll see I’m a Wizard w/ the heat & that Gortat you not to fuck w/ my bullets
My shits harder & for the dishonor you’ll get slaughtered
I’ll merk you w/out a trace cuz I never forget the gloves like Bridgewater
One look at ya pic and I was like shit homey is dead
I bet ya father called 100 of vic’s cousins just to put a roof over ya head

Allen Knight 05-09-2014 10:44 AM

Floyd ex, roman

Vs

Opener, smh, king of dot, gortat





V/ karpis, cool battle kwality had a solid verse but karpis verse was consistent as fuck
W/ some dope shit the smh bar and gortat shit were.fire, cool battle and props to both
But karpis won.

Bender 05-10-2014 05:27 PM

You take bars and concepts then use'em w/ no twist
Everything you post is Common Carp.. and your caught more then those fish

This biters HOF?.. Il break bones til this actor hurt
Alvin should be an Orthopedic Surgeon.. He's made a career w/ Fracture Work
Youve got mainly ancient concepts.. And all weak odds
The way you've been Roman thru History.. I thought you studied Greek gods

vs

I saw the tags, then your pic, and it has me forever grinning
Cuz it’s ironic us going head to head is the only battle you’re ever winning
He’ll tell you he seldom raps & he’s not the guy to embellish facts
& he didn't duck destroyer or get clowned off a site he was never welcomed at

One look at ya pic and I was like shit homey is dead
I bet ya father called 100 of vic’s cousins just to put a roof over ya head

These battle wasn't as good as i expected. I feel that both of the verses pretty even but I think Karp got this, Kwal had some ok punches but really trued to press the whole biting thing which I guess I think would be more tasteful outside of a battle.
vote -Karp

more solid verse..

Greed 05-10-2014 08:54 PM

Common carp was a fresh flip, fracture work was alright, roman was brilliant but I didnt like the execution

Vs.

Gortat, embellish facts came off cool, smh seemed weak to me

I got kwality with better misses. Not a great battle.

Adonis 05-15-2014 01:28 AM

This was a dope battle, I think you both wrecked shit. But first guys best punches were pointing out "bittens". I lie though, fracture work was dope. But the fact that he's still brought up amazes me, he's that dude though. Alvin out played k though. Kwalty's every diss it seemed was about Alvin recycling or using played shit, then karpis flipped the script using all relevant punches a la Gortat etc.

Vote Alvin. Seemed like Alvin did all rebuttal and it worked

Keyz 05-21-2014 02:01 PM

i got kwality here. I thought Karpis came with a much smoother and consistent piece but Kwal's personals on the biting were done well. LOTB was the fracture line for me though the roman line could have taken it but was slightly off with its wording.

Alv's piece was, like i said, overall smoother, consistent etc and the whole bitten topic did get overplayed by kwal but I just think Kwal had two heavy hitters were alvin had one.

V/Kwal

big baby 05-23-2014 08:49 PM

Refreshing take on both halves. Lol @ keyz voting with 6 posts, sigh. Both came cool. Kwal had a more personal take with the bringing up of the taken material. Karpis had a smoother verse that seemed to connect conceptually rather than a generic strue of continuity. Very decent battle, and closer than suggested. But I have karpis with a bit more refreshing take, it seemed to be less 'forced' but I used forced in a less common context. It just seems to be more fluid, as where kwality had a bit of a strained, contrived essence. More preferential if anything. A few were also just not that hard hitting to me, though all landing pretty decently. Voting for Alvin Karpis with a crisper take.

Sharp 05-24-2014 12:49 PM

Voting from phonecan elaborate if needed

Loved the greed is good concept but didn't like the way it was done
Floyds ex was cool
Fracture was prolly played against frac but it was personal
Roman thru history was cool but done a lil weird. Why Greek gods if he's roman?

The haed size lines were ok/cool
Gortat was a dope flip
King of the dot was Lotb for me


Closer battle yhan i expected but I thought karp was more consistent

V/karpis


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