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Originally Posted by Boredom's Line of the match
u are officially gows bitch, he could have u cleaning pots in his house
so when u get on ur knees for god ur not praying ur taking shots in the mouth
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Boredom's personals were great. The punches landed hard at the end of the verse -- and the scheme was above average. Loved the rhyme within the schemes... you were really able to stretch your bars to maximize the format
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Originally Posted by bleak's line of the match
Stop fronting, you're not showtime. keep it up, n I think Frank'll pop ya.
And that g shit should cease quick. in prison you'd get the Shank, Sinatra.
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The long verse was well demonstrated, I feel the rhyme could have been structured better. The name flips were good on a stand alone basis yet the repetitive nature left the punches soft. The concepts were great visually but they weren't cohesive enough
v/Boredom