Mordycai has potential.
I felt he was really off mechanically and strayed conceptually as well.
The rhymes were very basic and have been done time and time again. I can't honestly say that I really saw anything in this verse that was entirely original.
Ryan had the shorter bars and more well timed rhymes with a better grasp of where he was heading conceptually. Stayed on point more and could even note some some originals ideaas in the verse.
Gotaa vote
Ryan
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