Short vote
Adonies I wasn't really a fan of the short short short lines this week man, it really held the flow back from what could have been dope. the short lines and overly punctuated parts really made it read like only a story because the flow never held solid for me. The story itself was cool but didn't connect with the topic very well either, I can see how metaphorically it held to it but even then it was a bit of a reach imo.
Vulgar, decent drop bro, not the best I've seen from you either but the flow was ten times smoother than Adonis' this week and the story and topic felt more connected aswell.
good shit fellas but I gotta vote for vulgar
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