adonis - you're getting really staccatto.. err. punchy. that word. yah. you're doing that. anyway, breaking off into a religious pun? kinda? hm. you started really going off the wall .. i kinda liked it though. this was super creepy.
Good riddance Darkness.
I'll carve light into your skin case.
i fucking knew it! some jack the ripper shit. good stuff. . just kind of broken . got the gist overall but .. i failed to connect on a deep level. kinda surface level here. some more in depth from you.. would've given u the win this week eeasily.
vulgar- anti weed piece? burn in .. errrr.. actually this piece, is pretty good. you make some valid points. lol @ munchies team/supple green.. great take on puff the m. dragon and mythical creature. i actually enjoyed it in the end.
/v vulgar - his piece felt a lil more complete this week... although i do like the staccato flow, vulgar came through a lil more solid related to the topic.
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