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Old 05-23-2015, 08:46 AM   #13
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Originally Posted by Wanderer View Post
Listen..
We all know your game dead, bitches scream my name 'stead
Unless they Roman Catholic nuns a woman ain't never sacred
like the wordplay and concept but not the wording
I creep up in your house the only time ya girl start screaming
I'll Silencer. then have one pressed against your skull while you're sleepin
light hit on played wp.
Stand next to me bro? small man syndrome within you is Instilled
You're in need of a confidence Booster & one to help you see outta the windshield
"within you is instilled" is really weird wording. Makes the bar feel forced. The height joke would also work better if you could connect it to him personally
Hot chicks always go down for me.. I got the pics on my Camera son
Don't know if you can afford Canon but I bet your job involves being fired from one
all that work to say he's a clown? Light diss
& dude knows where a gay crowd is, he gets a dick out & crouches
Amount of fruits and seeds consumed coulda filled both jiltis hamster pouches
this was funny
Banging homeless dudes in the street for an easy lay.. your a joke
Actin like a government care worker way you givin aid(s) to poorer folk
forced. Don't do this
Must be terrified cos if it 'bout respect you need to gain some
I'm sure you're already touching Cloth but we certainly ain't cut from the same one
not feeling it
& I would bet good money you're a god fearing faggot.. scared of something that don't exist?
It's like me coming into this battle believing cred actually has lines to win this
this is basically filler
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Originally Posted by Cred View Post
Words get scrambled guns get drawn, my text game is lethal
& I got the perfec fraze for u bitch.. even DAT weak nigga cud beat u
props for the shout out but the execution could have been better.
Fukin junkie I serve fiends, u ain't got da money den give me the links
Cuz ill watch u die next to dem Drugz, like u was in da whip wit Chinx
cool
Dey screamin I'm da best again, the kings bck so let em in
Cuz I'm bout to fuk Wan up.. like I hated every Mexican
nice
I been bout it for years & his last oppenent cleaned house wit dis queer
Shit.. dis previous week Tic Tac made u look like u aint brushed ur teeth in years
nope.
Stop rappin wat u don't live, I do home invasions so I advise u b scared
Cuz I'll bring the Drama to ur crib, like we was hosting a mixtape release there
light jab on simple / played wp
I'm dumbin wit clout, I live lavish cop sumthin once it comes out
& if U got an Xquisite taste.. its dat niggas nuts in ya mouth
cool. But if you're gonna do nameplay flips more creative is better cause the simple ones have been done before
I wanted to put the Heat to em, den realized dis bitch ain't even tough
Cuz if dis gets fired, ull b on drugs for the nxt 2 weeks.. I nicknamed it Muff
cool concept bad wording
Dis dudes thru, plus I'm drillin ya wifey so the only fools, u
& she ain't even crazy, but da bitch put a literal meanin to the phrase 'loose screw'
awkward as worded and simple wp
holla.
Wanderer really only had the jilti hamster bar, but i thought sacred could have been dope worded diff. Cred had Chinx and Wan. Muff bar was also cool. Good battle but there were plenty of misses on both sides. Cred gets this with more consistency and better wording.

vote cred
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