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Old 10-13-2015, 10:02 AM   #10
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this was pretty smooth

flowed like butter

a few of us have almost got out of posting paragraph style after it had a semi-resurgence here but its always cool to see and read

sometimes it seems to read nicer than it does when the spacebars hit

anyone else feel that?

like almost its a stream of consciousness in this format with no break inbetween

the thoughts all just read like one continous sequence

rather than disconnected things on a similar theme

i enjoyed it

keep that pen moving!
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