MMLP, from the start your flow has got me going.
as the story progresses I start to see what your doing.
the vibe was mixed in with some great word choices.
you provide a perfect background for our enjoyments
& you build it so quickly its like watching the inspired work.
you piece together such fluidity with the way this is nicely versed
you tip the topic on top of its head & make it work to your talents
this is a great piece & I enjoyed the way you kept it balanced...
for nice switch ups to keep the overall rhyme length.
just another little thing I see in this that I find great...
Adonis, for some reason I am reading this to Black Skinhead
thats the kind of vibe that this verse has put me back in Nis...
its an interesting piece from the start & gets better toward the middle
the writing on the wall play made me feel weird & it was an issue.
but you continue to provide a great momentum that builds with pace
you tap into your background & slowly start to peel it away...
you paint an interesting picture & I applaud you for that...
v/MMLP, after reading both verses for a second time its decided
Adonis came with an impressive rhyme scheme & I really liked it
but MMLP just overwhelmed me with his ability to bend his flow
each line that followed on his piece showcased his impressive prose
everything blended so well on his verse while Adonis could have brought more
this was a great match regardless & I applaud what you both brought forth.
good battle
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