Nyc, fittingly.. this image was taken by a street photographer in new york in the early 1900s. Your verse was absolutely Impeccable. I enjoyed the monologue, it was a great addition to the verse.. The character development in the beginning was stellar, i could almost imagine the voice in my head for a moment. Nice work.
Cereal killer - this was a very strange piece indeed! Not quite sure what happened here if there was a story involved it was way over my head. There were some interesting parts but in the end i was left rather confused.
Mvgt nycspitz.
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