Cash got it on consistency and was fluid
MF came good, I thought that abes odyssey line was creative and I could tell he did work in thus verse, my only complaint is the execution was repetitive. 'im this.. call it, thats a etc' just switch up how you deliver shit by rewording things and imo that would help you elevate in a way. some thing feel wordy at times but if its some metaphor you're squeezing in the line then ok, but take out unnecessary words. Cash had hallmark a good throwback personal then was solid thru out. bit deeper and harsher.. more thought out yet direct.
vote cash
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