Classic you had nice concepts in there but all suffered from wording for sharpness directness whatever. None seemed specific to your opponent an was too many gun bars. Best line was probably knees kidney but then that was the most played concept. If you could word them like that one using your fresher creative concepts youd have it nailed.
Destroyer bar his opener was consistent, closer reminded me of orcsin the nbl last week tbh but was still clever and that 70s joint shit and swollen username were so simple an yet really effective
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