Krucial I enjoyed the camp trip play & that closer but there is irony in that line as well...
otherwise this was a fair showing, the Mario line would have been cool but to me its eh.
good job...
bleak...you hit me the same amount of hits as your opponent, I didnt really enjoy the last 4 lines though...
that was eh to me as well, so you two are on equal ground right now in my eyes...
nice work though...
overall I think I have bleak winning this one, krucial had a few decent lines.
the camp line was oddly worded but seems cool just because of the visual you try to bring.
that ending was pretty goofy though. thats what me leaning with bleak even though Im sure someone gets those 2 lines.
decent battle.
v/bleak
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