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Old 03-29-2018, 05:25 AM   #13
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Who ever said Jay dope is Lion, Tiger is the lamest dude
Girl aint fazed face to face W/a Giant pussy..Ever since she dated U
U & her gettin wild? this dudes a liar
U can see the reflection off the glass that Jay aint the only Pussy shes put behind her

Wording really defeated you this time, Spree. I mean look at all the redundant "U" used lol. Those 2 bars were your best highlights, IMO and they were basically the same concept just flipped.

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Im all about getting the party started, fill my grill wit E's til my spine sinks
N just like a pill shes chewing so much gum i aint surprised that i can see Pink

Great concept just needed more of a harsher execution.

title shot? You suck cock for rock, fag you aint got the balls to loot me
You saw this thot dressed like a massive pussy an thought, "yo that bodysuits me"

Lol little over worded but good.

Cmon bro, you pulling pussy? You a waste of space n better off dead
Your such a nobody this is actually just a picture of her giving you head
I pull bitches, im slick, you make a bitch go dyke quick
Your game so shit you couldnt bagpuss even when she dressed like it

Both great concepts that needed harsher executions.

Kind of bummed Spree didn't bring his usual. I think he tried to over do it and royally fucked him self in the end with this verse. Usually he's pretty dope at picture battling from all the pic battles I've seen him compete in. So he's either not motivated or just writer blocking at the moment. Jay had some really good picture references but failed to execute on some. I still think he edges this with consistency tho.

v/Jay
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