ok quick vote from me. my bad guys
zeedee- this was pretty damn sick. the story arch was fantastic. I fully expected the main character to have actually slain everyone at the party in a fit of hallucinations but it was even a better twist when he was holding a cane instead of a gun. the flow was pretty good. and I really stayed interested in the story.
pohfig- superior writing, flow and structure by you. the verse sounded great, read great but the story lacked for me. didn't keep me engaged like zeedees did. some real poignant lines in there.
this is tough. I cant really decide tbh cause its so close. two different styles here but my gut tells me to vote for
vote- zee dee
great battle guys. props to both
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