[Ronic]

Originally Posted by R!canTheoryz

Listen, Im blowin on Candy Weed. Sex on over drive cuz i be makin Panties Bleed,
once I stick my cam shaft in ya girl Pussy That Bitch Overheat Quicker then a Car With No AntiFreeze.
decent
Ur plot dont Fool me fucker in shock enough to make a Newly stutter,
ill leave megatron covered in flames quicker then burning a transformers movie cover.
nah too obvious, set up didnt really relate to punch
If ya feelin godly, yous faking & Gone Free,
& ill believe you've reached 'hard thoughts fallin' once ur skull completely grazes the concrete
okay, coulda been worded nicer
I bag bitches daily with a k9 nose thatll simply Detec chronic,
Im honest the numbers in megaphone aren't real that's Cuz hes into role playing with electronics
megaphone was a good concept, you wasted its potential here cuz
You almost lost last week & i could tell by ur style that ya Such a Fairy,
Keep Walking Around With Pryde & ya both could do a remake for the movie Chuck & Larry.
wording lacked sting, but okay hit

Originally Posted by Knucklehead

By u I can't be beat,I am THE best
Nigga u wack, ull never be close to heat even if u swam to key west
bah
We different, you. Swing 2 daze like. The weekend
to me we beefing,I'm swinging to leave. Rican bleeding like a cheap pen
liked the swing 2 daze like the weekend, hated the cheap pen rhyme
My niggas is ninja type no glocks, they use swords to give ya bitch a bunch of scars
The violence wont stop, when they see u you'll get chopped.,Like ya dish wasn't up to par
this bar wasn't up to par
ya tool don't lay niggas down, yu day slick ya hair back type ya frail
fool. If its trouble u bail,closest u ever been to jail is gel
nah no direction with ya concept, awful wording
I tote. Guns w. Heavy kickback, I bet he soil his pants when I get the choppa
Cuz the only thing poppin is Recoil..in the pan when he frying up some empanadas
ok, liked the name flip

I got R! takin this, but both needed to work on wording their concepts out to make sure they come thru and hit. RT's attempts were just slightly less choppy.

v/R!can