Won last time cus ya shady, & now how u gettin killed is just dumb son
Go head & pull the skeletons out my closet, ya just making room to become one
Decent opener here! Skeletons out the closet concept ok
This queers smacked. It's game time! vs. Sho? I'll never fear that
These two cans to ya head leave ya drinkin' out've straws like a beer hat
Niceee here, can beer hat shit was nice
Had to cut the dreads off for time, but it was quick - neva weight or a homi
Next time someone catch a sentence when ya wig pushed back, I caught a body
This was ok, no impact really behind this one. I like it statement wise tho
Bout slaughter I'm passionate, gon get bloody when ya ass get kicked
U ain't just gettin' smoked, I'm finna bash ya fuckin' head in til I can ash in it
This is nice and I like how you worded this right here
U won't be remembered. No tears when 44 44s hit what ya ride in
You ain't ever get Cred, you just got ur whole style stolen & elevated by him
Ok, I like this one too
Cupids aim, this AR got me feelin' the love when the lead blow
One ring'll put ya on ya knees & then ruin ya life like she said no
Lol, this here was coo...wordng was kinda ehh here....but coo
Rip ya heart out mid dinner, carve ya chest til ya dead on site
Have him at the table with some free space in the middle like bingo night
This is ok, the bingo night concept is coo
Ya girl is all over the place,cot damn that whore is drama
Have her jumpin' on every single piece of furniture like the floor is lava
Didn't really feel this one here
Snitch ass faggot, I don't need to sing so don't test me
When I pull the plug it's death, when u pull the plug ya got out early for the SC
Ehh, decent
Price on ya head - step in my city & a shadow on ya, so come 'round
Leave a body on the ground with these long arms like it's sunrise or sundown
Coo closer here
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Y’all hyped the shit so if we fight for this I want that check Spree
After I sneak up on him like Friday did and knock him into next week
This was a ight opener here
Y’all got this fag amped for the champ match like he that bad at this
If I’m where Knuckle is I’ll have no choice but to back-hand this bitch
Niceee
This geek’s souls getting murked, the shots just go off and lift it
Watch as ‘he rose from the earth’ like Yamcha Gohan and Krillin
This was nice, I like this concept here! Def a hit for me
Your queen’s a monster so when this beam hit y’all shirts...
Shots’ll enter that plate in ur chest while she licks the one clean that’s on hers
Couldn't really get with this one
I’m mean in all verses which is why I get dinero when I spit
Watch me Dominate you so much it’ll make Zelph & Aero say I bit
Nahhh here
Your wife’s a pug so we don’t ask what you like to fuck or ur type of slut
We’d rather our eyes get dug so we just leave knuckles out like biker gloves
This was coo here
I’m shootin at skeletons with the goriest guns come talk bold
I’ll have his Bone’s hit more than Notorious Thugs and Crossroads
Niceee
Rock him in a round like a cave man & after I whoop him it’s simple
Start draggin Knuckle on the ground like the Neanderthal his woman resembles
This was dopeee, good shit
He’s seeing red from my schemes of his white Queen and her slight problem
So i’ll hold the 19 over his face like visine before I drop him
This was could have been fiya, think you just rushed and forgot some wording....light jab here cause of wording
Then lock your fat ass in a car in your garage while it’s on bitch
Since you went on a run through this tourney now you’ll die of exhaustion
Didn't like the ender here
Props on this read, shit was a good on both ends, after two reads I got Knuck with the more overall consistent verse and less misses. Sho was going tf off as well, but had spots where he didn't have enough wording or he completely missed.
V-Knuck
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