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Originally Posted by Da Brayn Lord
What I be in the streets for? Uzi clips to sweep whores
Graveyard shit - Blast the matic & I'll put Plot in a plot like some deep lore
But fr this shit is crazy! We ain't needin this. Lives changing, it's wild how bleak it is
Good thing u can't lose ur job since u already did for being an alcoholic piece of shit
Keep drinking urself to death, everyone lookin for relief cus they really don't need him
That final drink will have ur support system feeling sublime, they'll call it the 40oz to freedom
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Originally Posted by Plot
Fat old ginger nerd, your a virus risk thru and thru..
Stay inside and don't touch ANYONE Seth, just keep doing you.
This guys stale, and his sex-life's all lies and fails..
Any rumors of Seth hooking-up with a bitch is an old wives tail.
One man blitzkrieg, geek will sweat when chromes let the lead blaze..
And we'll see Brayn-freeze, crippled in pain, thats no ice-cream headache.
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I was generous w/ the quotes. Thought you both had some good concepts w/ a lot of potential, but kinda fell short due to poor wording/setups. Overall, I feel like Seth was more consistent & landed the bigger shots. Props to both of you for showing
v/ Knucklehead