You’re a weak artist. You’ll never BE hardly more than that…
The Delta between us ‘has more Mississippis’ than pick-up games with retards at quarterback.
lol this concept is fire to me.. cool fresh idea, a tad longwinded with the punchline sure but the wording is great imo and great as is
This is a showdown between your BB gun and my wicked .44…
I rock arenas; This goblin couldn’t ‘bring the house down’ selling pillows door-to-door.
i've seen Down concepts before but the bring the house flip was alright.. decent overall
So, when I get done KO’ing this wack clone,
The crowd’ll be ‘unable to keep a straight face’ like a sumo free-soloing Half Dome.
pretty cool and interesting concept here imo, the punch as delivered is pretty light imo.. i'm assuming you're illustrating the crows "wincing" or something along those lines , cool enough but not super impactful
For me, a stalemate’s picking which lethal weapon is best for the kill;
For you, a ‘stale mate’ is how your exes rate your sexual skill.
i did a stalemate brit play a while back so it's not wowing from a freshness perspective, but lol i lvoe the way you delivered this.. cool bar
You talk tough. But, that corny brogue’s not adept at the lexicon…
I thought this was a clash of the titans; instead, I get Netcee’s resident leprechaun.
very nice multi but the irish/leprechaun as delivered is a little to obvious and straightforward on this one
You’re straight up pussy. I’ll murder ya line for line….
You’re a bigger Snowflake than the one Ace Ventura was hired to find.
lol funny movie reference.. line for line is 3 syllables and hired to find is 4 the multi threw me a bit.. but i haven;t seen a Snowflake concept before so i enjoyed this
I’m a lord of the ring. You’re a pitiful, hopeless disgrace…
SO many epic losses; the Tolkien be seen written all over your face.
dope.. like how you did this and it's fresh.. nice bar
It didn’t take much to son this bitch speaker…
This verse put him on life support… and I just ‘pulled the plug’ like wig weavers.
ehhh.. not a big fan of this flip
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Oh boyyy. Cashius Finch you dirty animal
Ur last Cross Examination ended with “Great, & are we SURE it’s flammable?”
lol the quote set this up well... cool double personal in a sense and concept...nice open
I’m sure u’ll finish a punch one day bro
Verses ain’t just Long-Winded. They’re enough to complete the Vendée Globe
lol love the setup, cool enough long winded concept...like this
Middle-aged UPN battlers ain’t got shit for me
Yikes. Dreamt of being Attorney General & finally won one in ur mid 40s
attorney wp is pretty ancient but i think the flip here is dope with a double personal touch as well
I get voters miss some bars but you should write less
Stop giving us the Third Degree. U were getting THAT when ur wife left
haha pretty nice lawyer concept...hits
A 45yr old rapper-lawyer.. say that out loud
It was Instrumental in her leaving, so was uploading those on Soundcloud
cool personal again, worded well...dig it
Ajax could NEVER be boss. This fucker’s a dweeb
His Energy’s off — got issues with gay Chi that’d worry Khabib
haha this made me chuckle.. cool original wp
The gangster rap obsession has really gotta stop friend
Boss asking about the Burden of Proof, you replying “Benny’s in my top 10”
haha this is fire to me.. timing aligned on this one...another good lawyer bar
I’ll b 5 up in votes. That’s how easy this shit is
I saw you were wack right away. No way you’re Leading the Witness
'leading the witness' i really like the concept...good wit on a bar bragging about being wittier lol... nice closer
Great read guys strong verses from both sides...Ajax that opener was bonkers to me, Tolkien a concept i really enjoyed as well
But i've got orc here with the consistency... really didn;t miss much and had a good blend of comedy and creative personal hits
Props to both this was fun
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