Quote:
Originally Posted by Wanderer
Old age not holding u back.. u really try n give it ur all
Go ahead & smash it at 60 but PLEASE let it be into a brick wall
ok.
Wand grown now. I own u cuz my shits all swag
my property; only time u made a name for urself was sowing one into ya schoolbag
light
My body’s a temple. Treating it right gets me girls I’m pleased to hit
Ur bodies a temple.. fucking ancient & men get on their knees for it
ok-ish
violent with whiskey in my system so u don’t wanna see me switch
Last time u got buzzed & made threats local kids were playing ding dong ditch
ok but light
empathy for ur history? Nah. I laugh cuz It’s fucking unreal..
Ur style got the kind of undeveloped features even ya wife would struggle to kill
these bars are getting kinda old. this is a pretty simple take on an overdone concept
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Quotes: smash it at 60
Close: bodies a temple, ding dong ditch
Nothing was really bad but also didn't have anything that stood out to me. made a name was too light as a punch for me. closer was ok but need to be more creative with well tread subject matter.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Destroyer
we all keep waiting for that dope wand verse... but yeah, not yet...
the fetus my wife lost at 6 weeks was more fleshed out than ur concepts
kinda ok. better angle than wands closer but still overdone
i do admit that it’s at least admirable that u keep trying
the nice guy who shows up to consistently lose, ur the 2020 version of Defiant
light
u got no magic in ur bars and u lack passion as well
last time we saw wand light up the scene it was with a lumos maxima spell
ok
give up. sign out. bottom line is u whack son
i mean fucking Trump gonna fire barr long before u ever craft one
definitely hits since barr just "resigned"
ur amateur in a ring with a beast. ur obv gonna get murdered geek
cuz ‘there’s just no pro available here’ like what i’ve been saying at work for weeks
not feeling this
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Quotes: lumos maxima, fire barr
Close: more fleshed out
Fire barr was LOTB. Not much else stood out. Ok verse for 10
Vote: Destroyer Destro had a slightly better verse.