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Pharaohs Army · 02-25-2021, 09:59 PM

I'm not going to go into too much detail on this vote, for obvious reasons.

I think Objective took this easily, as Lieutenant's appears to be a quick and simple keystyle.

Objective:
Thought you developed the female goddess character pretty well. Few spots didn't rhyme, or had non-traditional rhyming style. I guess that's okay. Might have hurt you if you were up against a great verse. But not here. Didn't like the ending. Thought you could do without it. It's overly simple and is like you speaking to the audience, as opposed to the rest of it which is you describing her.

02-25-2021, 09:59 PM	#8
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,962 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	I'm not going to go into too much detail on this vote, for obvious reasons. I think Objective took this easily, as Lieutenant's appears to be a quick and simple keystyle. Objective: Thought you developed the female goddess character pretty well. Few spots didn't rhyme, or had non-traditional rhyming style. I guess that's okay. Might have hurt you if you were up against a great verse. But not here. Didn't like the ending. Thought you could do without it. It's overly simple and is like you speaking to the audience, as opposed to the rest of it which is you describing her.