yall wack af. one of u too corny, the other's punches come up short
couldnt connect to a live person if ya fist yelled 'representative' over customer support
The flip concept is really funny. Wording is a little clunky - 'your punches never connect to a live person' is a weird thing to say. I still like it because of the humour.
plus fresh the type to shoot ya while sleepin at point blank
you lie motionless as i uncover the sheets like a magician's tablecloth yank
Not bad. Creative flip.
And your clever friend is a feathered pen, your tourney path is ending quick
Ironic how whenever Quill’s writing I just scratch my head n dip
This is almost fire. The wp/punch is great, I just think it needed a bit better of a conceptual set up to be its best rather than just throwing rhymes around. Still bar of the battle though.
This pair of losers collaborating in the lab is no threat
If I found you two holed up in the studio then Jayson’s already stabbed you to death
Cool, not a big hit but I like it
Evad acts gangster til I drive thru then he's certainly friendly
The only way Dave'll square up when it comes to beef is burgers at wends
Cool. Not a big punch but lots of wp tie ins that do work
You faggots think ya'll sick...but this test'll have ya halt..
Cuz this stick to your face? Gon' lead to a negative result
Pretty cool
If I let the bucs fly? You should jet before they start mowin ya down
Yeah once the GOAT targets ya, you leaving topless like Antonio Brown
Eh it's OK. Lots of wp tie ins again but the sum of them didn't impress me like the previous bars. I had to google the reference which took from the impact I guess. Some reference to taking his head off or something to flip the 'topless' thing would've helped maybe
I throw the kind of combos that end up rocking ya life fools
Y'all are just a combination we'll never remember...lockers in high school
haha. I like this. Simple but the punch is there and the flip is relatable and funny
Close but I'll give it to Fresh. Quill was more technically sound but the humour and creativity in Fresh's verse scores more points for me, and he had the bar of the battle.
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