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Old 07-07-2022, 04:26 PM   #5
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Who's this lame? head shot wen the toolie flame
Ruger bang. I'll push Daves shit backwards quicker than his username
^ feel like I’ve seen this one a few times already but okay.

Catch u in traffic n u goin to da grave wit ya bitch. AK wit da grip
Grand Theft Auto: Vice City.. this nigga gettin sprayed IN the whip
^i didn’t find this as clever as the usual cred gun bar was super generic

Pull up n blam first. Dracos in hand wen my mans lurk
as soon as he Drops they'll be talkin bout the Pops like last weeks bags verse
^ehhh ok

Let off a .22 in his gut jus for dog even thinkin he cud go against me
dis Shit 'll rip the whole lining out ur stomach quicker than Rawn MD
^ nice relevant attack. Liked it. Sorry Rawn lol

Fuck this foreign faggot s'no way u cud be my enemy bitch
U'll end up a dead man over that beef, Dave.. on some Wendy's shit
^didnt really feel this one man. See what you were trying to do but it’s been done

Dave:
Born ready, You know my hands on the holster
Cred Take two steps and get clapped to the side of the head like he was dancing the salsa
^first of all this shit doesn’t rhyme at all (fuck my American accent!) the punch was cool though

& If He admits his wife is a hoe you’ better believe him
Her entire scheme is the wire theme - different dudes going way down in the hole for every season
^ liked it but if you took “for” out of the ending it would have flowed more smoothly, might be nitpicking but idk

Bitch can’t keep it to herself that’s why she walk like she got that ‘rupaul tuck’
Soon as she slide that back up a bunch of dudes start unloading like it’s a uhaul truck
^its alright if not a little generic

I can get u benzos or perc, but homie I ain’t tryna grand stand
Creds only experience with big pharma was that affair he had with John boy the ranch hand
^LMAO...fire

& Dave is nice w/ the hands but really I like the uzi better
All it take is one burst to twist up the fabric of his chest like it’s a coogi sweater
^ decent closer

I think Cred had some played out shit and both had their missteps. Overall I think a couple of Daves bars hit harder, and big pharma was LOTB

V/Dave
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