Got Saint here
But don't think it's a huge blowout...could be kinda close because:
I thought Mac had a damn strong opener...cool, but,
His 2nd punch the rhyme@ the end seemed kinda dull or tiny bit sloppy...Not as crisp as tight opener.
So I guess Saint's W would be overall efficiency/better wording IF we look from top to bottom and have to make a call.
Over the past few mnths I've seen Saint as a really strong Writer 'round here and even if he quicked this up it's pretty cool...That said I would caution him: most of it's tight but I am not loving that near/stretch rhyme of
ween to women/ illegal business
maybe stretching for fun/humor-punch but let's try to keep it tighter like the rest of your winning verse here.
Thx both for drops; GL wk 2.
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