Intro was cool. Debunk theory was also a cool concept but the writing around it was bad. I feel like you put down the rough draft and never look back at it for another pass. Might help to do so and reread it to yourself to think how you could word it differently to make it sting more.
Vs
Mac in a bag was ok, nothing really stood out as amazing but it was consistent. I feel like a lot of your concepts were worded in an obvious way that would probably be better for live battles but not so great for text.
Reluctantly going with Mac on this one as more of a toss up. I felt he had better concepts but just needs to work on wording them better. It was really close to me tho and hard to pick.
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