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Pharaohs Army · 05-03-2023, 07:19 PM

@NBL @Wordz AhGod @DynamiCz @~RustyGunZ~
Guys here's the vote - it don't count but I'm a motherfuckin machine so here...
Wordz vs. Dy (week 3)
I got Wordz here guys.
Veteran great verse and just pretty top notch fire for most of it.

DY
YOU ARE UNLUCKY my friend, Drew 2 legends in a row after your week 1 VOTW
THIS verse here of yours is nice...eh...nice but NOT the FIRE of week one and YEAH THE EVEN BETTER (LOSING FIRE) OF WEEK 2:
reasoning:
I feel lke (god am I feeding this sentence):
Occccasionally you overuse Gunplay (FINE if it's really great like wk 1 or 2)
Occccasionally you overuse Caps even, and maybe a few !exclamation points sometimes/
I LOVE AND USE BOTH CAPS AND !, HOWEVER DY, I THINK in the future if you just cut down SLIGHTLy (even tho i hypocr. asked for a cap on wk2)
cut both down SLIGHTLY you will read more straightforward and harsh.
Right?
Just MY suggestions.
I'm only 39 and have only worked at newspapers and edited/wrote most my life so......
RIGHT @Barcotic @Zuo YOU SENSITIVE WEAK COCKSUCKING FAGGOTS

ANyway
Wordz!
FIre man you really got everything you talked about
I could sure prolly pick 1 bar or half a line but u know what
VOTW so far easy. easy.
lol
ALL I ASK IS U EXPAND UR HORIZONS, READ A FWE OTHER GUY'S BARS
MAYBE SLOG THROUGH A LONG BATTLE OR SOMETHIN, just see whats up
ACCCCEPT THAT FACT THAT SINACOG AND I QUICK-HIT A LOTTTT so a 1 line punch or a 3line punch aftetr too-long setup LEARN IT DEAL WITH IT FUCKING USE IT SOMETIME (If u want)

we travel at lightspeed lars.
This vote is a GREAT vote and HoL said I clock in at like under 7 mins here
~
Aero keep this on the chat THX (it's battle stuff BA)

05-03-2023, 07:19 PM	#166
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,962 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	FINAL VOTE - WEEK 2 NBL s17 - Wordz edges Dy @NBL @Wordz AhGod @DynamiCz @~RustyGunZ~ Guys here's the vote - it don't count but I'm a motherfuckin machine so here... Wordz vs. Dy (week 3) *I got Wordz here guys.* Veteran great verse and just pretty top notch fire for most of it. DY YOU ARE UNLUCKY my friend, Drew 2 legends in a row after your week 1 VOTW THIS verse here of yours is nice...eh...nice but NOT the FIRE of week one and YEAH THE EVEN BETTER (LOSING FIRE) OF WEEK 2: reasoning: I feel lke (god am I feeding this sentence): Occccasionally you overuse Gunplay (FINE if it's really great like wk 1 or 2) Occccasionally you overuse Caps even, and maybe a few !exclamation points sometimes/ I LOVE AND USE BOTH CAPS AND !, HOWEVER DY, I THINK in the future if you just cut down SLIGHTLy (even tho i hypocr. asked for a cap on wk2) cut both down SLIGHTLY you will read more straightforward and harsh. Right? Just MY suggestions. I'm only 39 and have only worked at newspapers and edited/wrote most my life so...... RIGHT @Barcotic @Zuo YOU SENSITIVE WEAK COCKSUCKING FAGGOTS ANyway Wordz! FIre man you really got everything you talked about I could sure prolly pick 1 bar or half a line but u know what VOTW so far easy. easy. lol ALL I ASK IS U EXPAND UR HORIZONS, READ A FWE OTHER GUY'S BARS MAYBE SLOG THROUGH A LONG BATTLE OR SOMETHIN, just see whats up ACCCCEPT THAT FACT THAT SINACOG AND I QUICK-HIT A LOTTTT so a 1 line punch or a 3line punch aftetr too-long setup LEARN IT DEAL WITH IT FUCKING USE IT SOMETIME (If u want) we travel at lightspeed lars. This vote is a GREAT vote and HoL said I clock in at like under 7 mins here ~ Aero keep this on the chat THX (it's battle stuff BA)