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Old 08-01-2023, 09:23 AM   #5
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Symetrik - lol this was wild and slightly confusing. You said should you tell your owner that his significant other has another love interest but I thought this person was an animal, but you did say they worked at a desk job but also in a cage. So the cage was figurative I'm thinking. And then I'm confused about the setting is this an office or a home? This was a wildly erotic story that comes from your suppressed inner desires lol. This was funny I loled at inconsolable sobbing.

Scar - rhymes I've sprawled. Sprawled is a wild word choice here. Really liked these lines: Past the evening, November frost in our breath
Heaving thoughts and dreams in store windows

It's poetic. So basically the story is you fell in love with rhyming but it didn't love you back and so you chose to stay in your cage?

I'm voting tie here. Two different takes and neither outshined the other and I cant be tasked to figure it out.
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