Feelings of inadequacy in an unfair world through the eyes of a child as it grows is highlighted well in this piece. Wouldn't say it's a masterpiece but you captured the atmosphere well and finding the pen in moments of hardship is relatable to a lot of us. Enjoyed the read as it felt honest and personal.
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I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave,
So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave.
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