Extract cyanide thru their stems to utilize in the most abusive sense
on come back for revenge with crueler intents than Lazarus events
when actual doom impends, I star trek with kombayshi maroon defense
A modern day Goliath and Dave that’s combined in one frame
Who’s a stone’s throw away from a giant when my prides in the way
^dope flow. felt the content w/ those top 3 lines the most out of anything in your verse. also liked that final line thought that stones throw away/prides in the way was pretty dope inner rhyming/content as-well. based on that, the swag was also clearly on point.
To blindly enter fights like Leviathen slammin heinekens.
After, dip in drippin wet princesses stripped of innocence
When it cums to burning rubber, her landing strip caught the jist of it.
those lines were nice, felt the swag heavy in the first one, & i thought caught the jist of it was nice, even though you did throw in a cum/come which is somewhat unheard of/should not be used. still, regardless i felt it.
honestly, fig, i was not feeling the first few bars in your verse flow/swag wise, they just didn't piece well together for me, seemed a bit choppy.
overall, for consistency's sake & overall content/swag/flow i'll give it to rawn who edged swag & content & took flow for me quite easily due to figs first few bars.
v/ rawn, edges it
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