Few comments... pretty muddy mix, very bass-centric, not much use of high frequencies... ie the snare sounds like it's got a LPF on it then been compressed to fuggery. EQing your instruments to give everything its own space will help, also sidechaining your bass to the kick so they aint masking each other will give you a nice pumpin sound.
Beat had me noddin tho but when those hey heys goin on they're masking the lead vox, so you need to either pull them down in the mix, or push your lead vox up a few dB for the chorus... for extra clarity, find a way to EQ them to not be competing for the same frequencies.
Finally, work on ya lyrics bro, that not a little and nibble shit was just awful.
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