Quote:
Originally Posted by Sharp Nine
Profit's verse
Got a gun but not the type to pull it
You'll die jest swallowing these shells lets see you bite the bullet..!
You at raves with Muzzle tryna move E's but no ones heard of y'all
Think you dishin that work till I cut your service off!
& with girls he gets no love, they don't know him
even if he had a thousand fans they wouldn't blow wind!
This fake fuck, I'm playin with a pussy like a vibrater
When it comes to his verses, nobody gets W like a tiebreaker!
Hi hater, If I know wind-owes me money it's his ass dawg
Throw rocks at this square nigga breakin' his glass jaw!
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Every line was good. Vibrater is spelled "vibrator", to send any criticism, but everything in his verse was good and fairly even.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Windu Tuako
Taking a learning experience 'personal' really shouldn't be ya game plan!/
Cuz u whined about lines coming from theMuzzl3 like Bane fans!!/
You asked for this Net loss when u chose ya name and avy/ (Mike Tyson avy)
So since I'm taking you from Profit to in the red let me thank you badly!/
Even if you give each concept your very best its losing/
We see ya text as shit due to retarded executions!/
Numbers omit details so trusting ya record's a no no then/
So you should've did this battle like ya only victory and no showed Win!/ (Windu)
I know he's mad cuz he's such a piece of cake that I'm EZ baking!/
Now watch Prof have a period like teacher abbreviations!!/
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Nice try. I like how you also mentioned me. I'm not exactly sure why all the "/" thingies are in there. You did a decent job, but over all:
/v Profit