This was pretty close.
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Originally Posted by Malachai
Your against the prophet, to beat him you need magic
You couldn't get Prop unless we're talking bout no.17, you faggot
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This was probably the best line of the match. I think the verses need to be a bit more even and the end rhymes need work. However, the opener and closer both hit pretty hard. It warrants a second look sometimes to where you're headed with the punches. The concepts were on point and the personals were well illustrated
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Originally Posted by Utmost.
YOU betta get vocal, yell for help or scream the lords name n' pray
Coz to win here, Ur gonna need Hush to break silence & God to be ya saving grace
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I liked the personals and the meter and the rhyme. Again, these two verses are somewhat similar. I gotta give you props on trying to stretch as long as you did. The sloppy structure, with the use of heavy commas and periods in-verse, didn't work out. I think if the verses were rearranged they would flow a lot better.
These 2 was about equal, but Malachai started and closed better.
v/Malachai.