[big baby]

Read both thoroughly twice. Loved Oats approach and alternate switching of moods. Didn't really like the parenthesis part. Seems lazy, and I understand the satirical approach of those lines but it left too much to the reader without painting a context clue beforehand. :(. Zyg delivered a pretty stellar piece. Impressed. I liked the idiomatic spontaneity. It was developed well and consisted of a more truer topic, rather than a erratic one Oats made. I understand the space in the universe, and our actions matter, but what I don't understand is how you managed to tie everything together for a final thematic element which consisted of the gut of your verse. Seemed to be off a tad. Mechanics were there on both sides and you guys are the better writers mechanically of this tournament thus far. Zygote had a flow like canibus really and it was interesting. I liked the way he set up his verse. Both had minimal flaws in emitting more elements to it, tomake the thematic fullness less of a bothersome and complicated read, but you both came to win. It's just preference at a certain point, honestly. And zygote I think embodied that slightly more. Though on a sunnier day I mightve chosen oats. But it's not sunny today. And that's just a mild mannered assumption. Good job guys.