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Old 08-13-2018, 09:16 AM   #12
Blue Bayou
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Fat wife, gaming nerd, shit his pants at Karaoke calling his work
You'll shit it worse when I turn up at your house an bury your head in the dirt
hmmm, shit "it" made the wording weird to me, don't love this angle
Remember @ work when Karaoke called n you knew youd made a big blunder
So shit enough bricks to build bridges that ya troll lookin wife could live under
I get the personal angle, but bridge/troll ref are pretty played out so this wasn't very fresh to me
I brought thunder to Schad an Barc son, faggot you faced Spree an barely won
How fuck can I be upset champ beating a bitch who ain't champed since version 1
cool personal, like the angle in tying it to ur "nickname" .. this hit
So stick to writing Vamp Diaries fan fiction n stop thieving what's been done
cus even a teen bitch know Strix been bitten more by you then a Mickelson
had to look this up, wp is cool .. a bit out dated with a vamp/bite concept but it plays because of the personal here
N designin games isnt G, you a geek n it couldn't be clearer to me
only Demo graphics I wanna see is how many times you crept outta work cus of Karaoke
multi is blah but i'll give you a pass for accent, mehh this one was stale to me
Even i was at yo work in Ithaca..a worse monstrosity couldn't be pictured
Lol'd followin you home to fuller lane where yo fuller shit witta wife thats fuller figured
nah, not digging.. came off corny
See no one betting you got the fire to bring, diode confirms you in a downswing
Only stock you got here is you bitC0in before cryptocurrency was even a thing
BOOM.... this was dope, nice np
N you wed Moby Dick. Now you stuck with the fat bitch for ya life
you ringing it was funnier than when Karaoke did your office phone and you cried
did he actually cry? lmao, this one was cool and hit
LMAO at your bitch and kid, shit he looks more like Kim Jong uns son
least you can say baes got a body like a coke bottle.. the 3 litre family sized one
lol, pretty funny .. like the 'coke bottle' silhouette angle
Seth Canfield or Michael Scott? Nothing separates the two..
starts with a big boy voice before girlish shrieks cus Karaoke at The Office do
ehhh, cool idea tbh but this feels really rushed & underdone
You a god at this shit.. psht behave im a wizard bar spitting mage
throw hands N this body fall at your feet from no where Low Key - call me Dr Strange
nice creativity here, this was dope


vs.


You dream of bein' a brotha, but writing internet raps not gon help
If u wanna look at ur life a little darker, just reflect on all ur failures & off yourself
lol, pretty morbid but I like the straightforward personal here
Slicin' ya characta. Anteater NEVER miss, so damn right I'll embarrass ya
Let's talk shells - When I unload a clip they're all in ur head like ya life in America
nahh, the 'all in your head' idea is very played, even with the personal this was mehh to me
Don't know what ya tryin' for, u a lyin whore if u say u'll rip out my spinal cord
Just look at ya last tourney showin, u won't catch a Body or get to the Final Four
nice, wording was very solid & the personal(s) hit
Forever a loser. Makes 0 sense how u could be so strange & lame
The only time you dropped the real and added a W, you had to change ya name
niiiice, good angle here, liked this
Spree showed us last week, you can't win battles if you only get to stalkin'
Spend all night diggin' up dirt, & u'll just end up w/ a hole big enough to fit ur coffin
nah, 'digging up dirt' coffin lines are very played out, personal & wording helps but still meh
So talk bout my wife, run up on urs & it's the last time she ever see u
I'll swing the blade low & have u holdin' her gut while ya cryin' like a pregnancy shoot
niiice, fresh concept this is dope
This my house, boy. Best believe I'll choke slam & rock a whore
Finish him! I'll ring ya fuckin' neck 'til Cashius sees ya face & locks his doors
ringing his neck would make him blue, this needed to be worded diff.. funny angle tho but I feel like the 'black' part here doesn't work as choking/chke slamming him would make him turn blue not black
Coached u as a newb too, but my perspective on ur goals wasn't good dude
Guess when I heard you wanted to be like a Schein I reallyyy misunderstood you
lol this was pretty decent, good swag
I'm the King, u wanna take the throne? Well, u ain't been so clean
You ain't never dropped fresh, prince.. u even stole ur backstory from his intro scene
nice personal, this hit well & the prince tie in was set up very well to make this work
Why do u do this to urself? Gotta be sad reasons for the stories
Been handling baggage just to crash & burn worse than that airline employee
pretty dece, wording made the personal land well
Them forced wordplays & reaches are wack, u a try hard from the jump
How u gonna act black when what u bringing is both bland AND too fancied up
nahh, not feeling


Cool battle with a lot of personals on both sides which was refreshing. Both had some meh played concepts but both also had a couple nice zingers with good personal touches as well... Flo bitCoin and the closer were dope, Knuck really liked pregnancy shoot, flo add a W, and the fresh princ / philly bars... Yeah overall I've got Knuck in this one with a little more consistency & a few less misses overall... props to both

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