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Old 01-08-2022, 11:57 PM   #13
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Great use of gifs guys that's super fun, thanks.

These vets in danger, both got a rep for molestin’ strangers
Cuz Mac been to more courts for taping legs than athletic trainers
Nice. Cool concept executed well. This is smooth.
& Sharp’s divorced, wanted love but was met with a harsh taste
And that separation had his ex taking balls to the house like Ja’marr Chase
Punch lost a little impact for me needing the explanation, but now that I get it I can say that it's objectively pretty good. Tied to the personal angle well
Skinny faggot, keep talking and get punched in the neck
Stays debating Unions in discord, but can’t stay in one with his ex
Heh. Simple wordplay but the punch is harsh enough and the double personal makes it quite good
We’re fun drunks! U drink vegan martinis before ER visits.. & ur the smallest guy
When we Cialis a good time, you gotta pop those just to have one then almost die
This one's a big miss for me. I saw you explain it as "see ale is". I've never heard it pronounced like that and I know it's not just bc I'm Australian because I heard it recently when I watched Don't Look Up and considered flipping it myself haha
Wife is gone, & she got it all in the divorce.. there's no lookin back
Tragic.. She left u without any pussy for comfort wayyy before she took the cat
LoL. I mean the wordplay is pussy/cat which is obviously is super played/basic/noobish but the personal feels harsh and funny enough that I still like this




Seth, thanks for the support. I'm glad for your cherished friendship...
Because every time I think of your family I feel relieved my marriage ended
LoL. Good way to flip the expected divorce personals back on him. Worded well enough to hit
Stopped art for the kids but I'm the failure? That's absurd and it's twisted
You've created two things in your miserable life and one turned out autistic
Haha. Again good, wording is harsh
User, you love my partner as much as you hate battling. Homie, listen:
An extreme desire to spoon Mac doesn't count as wanting to crush the competition
Not bad. Have seen 'crush' wordplays before. Not super hard hitting punch wise but it's an OK bar
Fat, old, unmotivated. Seth n User deserve every roast and neg
These two are the most disgusting drain in text since the one in User's bloated leg
Cool. Wp's basic but the personal tie in makes it OK
you're on the verge of death - man ur whole family should know
Insurance risk form.. checked all the boxes quickly like its a website cookies window
Probably your weakest bar. It's a light punch even if the context you put it in is creative, and the wordplay is pretty basic unless I'm missing something.


This is pretty close IMO but I'll give it to the gingers. Sharp's first two bars were harsh but then the verse became just OK and then meh on the last bar. Knuck had the Cialis bar that was a bad miss to me but otherwise was consistently good. Thanks for the read fellas
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