Drawing board was decent flip on old concept, shoelaces was dope, other then that your verse seemed rather generic & stretched. Feel you should slim your bars down a little you definitely got some dope concepts but your bars seem to drag on.
Vs
The certain personal, seadad was funny, this wasn't a great verse but you stayed with a personal aspect which kind of gave your jabs a better sting then just being a punch. Nothing was over the top but the ones that connected hit home.
Vote awerve even though Vul had lotb.
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