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Old 03-19-2016, 12:19 PM   #6
Pinot Grij
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Yo Suth, the lines were all decent. I think your strength comes in the wording. Even if the diss wasn't real fierce, the line would read dope and either the rhyme itself or the flow or the swagger of the writing gave it some impact. Notably, the Robocop line. I think the Zelda line is a standout - shit was funny cuz you hear the sound when you read it. That's cool.

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Junto

Finally a Trump flip that isn't cringey. Well worded and executed.
Dope bracket flip.
The bedtime scheme is funny.
Caught a body is dope.
Closer seems like a throwaway.

I gotta edge this one to Junto. Some inventive concepts. A lot of offense. Just a solid drop. Suth didn't come with that extra layer that Junto did.

Vote -- Junto
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