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Old 07-10-2021, 10:55 AM   #10
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Long-term plan is Orc you geek, warm up week; You just a whore to me
How I know you're not a man? Body cam, I have it on good authority
No hall of names for Swerve; I tried to find text that's saved and failed
Kinda sketch he has a way with words yet left no paper trail...

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This isn't the GWL, to pass at this you'll need balance,
But you do always write to a theme....trash texter with no actual talents.
I'm a grizzly all star from deep, but in the streets I let the colt sing,
You're not curry -
So when this last minute replacement shoots from range, I'm winning the whole thing.
Decapitate with each swing, Swerve have you leaving in parts,
Lay this hook on a 'Verse so nasty...it'll get to number on on the charts.

I got swerve here. Most of the lines by universe lacked sting and were pretty simple.. like the gay or missing line.. if it were 10 lines this would have been much more close, 16too much. Swerve came pretty decent and consistent.. some bland lines too but overall slightly better.. good battle guys, good to see a Universe verse again
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